Fire

Thank you....

It was absolutely Beautiful!

A BEAUTEFUL LOVE ON FIRe

SO ROMANTIC &PASIONATE STORY .SO LOVINGLY &REAL REALY EMOTIONAL AND LOVEIT'S SO WONDERFUL I LOVE THE END SO ESPACIALY WHEN SAM GAVE HIMSLIF TO MAX

i totally adore your stories

u r cleary extremely talented author and this story is just so heart warming!
and a woman i love the mirrored relationship of bill and his wife with the sam & max relationship. they r both vey beautiful and special..and VERY HOT!!
loved every word of it xXXx
keep on writing ;)

what an amazing story

you are truely an author of note. Kudos to you. This story kepy me reading and the energy and love in these pages are really magnificent. i hope to find this kinda love in my life-time. Thanks for writing this.

Very Good

Such an awesome story, as usual! I am reading all of your posts on Literotica again, and just started with Fire.
Can't wait to read the rest again. Keep up the great work!

Brought tears to me eyes

What a wonderful book this would be. Author, you have the gift.

Beautiful

Simply beautiful

wish i could have

in all my life i had wanted a love like that but i know its not in store for me. i am just thankful that others can find it. and you write about that love so beautifully

wow!

thank you very much for sharing this wonderful story. Jeesh! you got my emotions all over the place. thank you again. Please keep on with your writing. most excellent!

I really loved reading this.

What a beautiful story. Each one I read is only better and better. Love like this is so rare and it is wonderful to read about

Beautiful.

Very few reads bring me to tears, but this one has every time I read it.

You are one of my favorites

This was one of the most romantic and passionate stories I've ever read. Thank you.

Heartache

I usuall feel my heartache for my boyfriend. But now I feel it for the men in this story! You have a gift, and use it well! Please continue to pull our hearstrings DWSimon!

Great read!

Another great story. I loved it. Sex and romance both. Good job!

Gut wrenching is the only word that I can find to describe this story. You have us all as uptight and desperate as the two guys, and then turning into a puddle of goo with relief and happiness at the ending. You, sir, are a master who plays your rapt audience like a helpless, wailing fidddle and puts us through a hot torture of sex and love. I salute you.

Great!

Loved this.......the romance and connection made the already hot sex that much hotter!

Honestly

I couldn't tell you how many times I've read this story or any of your other ones. Each one I've read multiple times and always get caught up in them all over again. Thanks so much for writing!!! I just wish you would write more. :)

One of my top 3!

This is by for one of my favorite stories on this site! Very sexy, romantic, and believable. Would love to see a short epilogue with them maybe having kids!!

I loved it

Thank you for the wonderful read!

Today was my fourth time reading this story. I was shocked to see that I'd never posted a comment on your most wonderful story of love. Your stories got me into writing, I only hope that someday I can write half as well.

I'm sure that I speak for a multitude of readers here when I say...DW Simon...your break is over. Come back to us with more of your wonderful stories. PLEASE!

Goodness knows how many times I have read this story but as always I cry and smile at true love and the belief in second chances and soul mates.
You are a brilliant writer and I love reading all your stories... don't ever stop

Only one loose end needs to be tied up...

The arsonist - disappeared from the story, but needs some kind of resolution.

One of the very best!

Only a person who has known such love could put down these words so eloquently. I have been so blessed in my life to have felt and given of myself such love that compares to no other. For this reason, I count myself among the most fortunate of men for having shared true boundless love that overwhelms the heart.
Thank you for reminding me of this wth your story.

Beautiful!

Your story was amazing! Tears came to my eyes at the end. You have incredible writing talent. You draw the reader in to the lives of the people in your story. It is so real, real emotion. It is perfectly written so many of us can identify with and understand how your characters feel and why they do and act like they do. Thank you so much for your story. Please keep writing for us. We are waiting. :-)

Amazing

What a wonderful tale. Thank you! Will you be writing again soon?

As Sky and Ty have said, 'Dude, you rock!'

.. and for the reasons they state, a great piece of writing. A story that lifts itself off the paper, or in this instance, comes right through the screen. Definitely one to be read several times over.

Nine kids?!

Oh sweet Jesus! Nine kids? I just...nope.

good story.the plot was great and fast paced.but there was little romance it all happened too fast.
but it is a good read.

Excitement

OK - it really is a romantic story - but the descriptions of guys fucking is sooo erotic and well described...........bet every guy gets a hard cock reading this !

Of all your stories on Lit

This one is by far my favorite.

The passion, romance and finally finding that one true love... Although my beloved is now gone, I know how truly lucky I was to have shared a life with mine. One of my greatest hopes is that everyone can find such unabiding love.