Fire

awesome

Beautifully written, sensual and sexual all at once. Very erotic, with a clear and interesting voice. The narrator isn't perfect, or even very nice, but that character works for the story.

GREAT STORY

I enjoyed your story to the fullest. The characters, story line, everything was so perfect! I hope that you keep writing your stories and I would like to know what happens to Max and Sam and of course the others. Great story and please keep on writing!

Hot!

Lush and romantic, with a wealth of detail. I definitely liked it.

YUMMY...

Like a wonderful piece of chocolate... I can't wait for the next bite.

brilliant!!

You have an amazing gift for writing that lets the reader feel every emotion. I found myself draw completely into a story i wouldnt normally read. Well done!!

you hit it all

you hit all the human sides to sex. hope, dreams, history, connection, love, intensity, physicality - and the best part is, just reading this, i can tell you know and feel everything you lay on your audience. beautiful story - keep up the great work!

So relevant...

I'm such a romantic this story got me tearing up... so well written, sexy, emotional. I loved every line. And with what's going on here in California, it just makes me so ever hopeful for the future. Keep writing, you're touching my heart.

Incredible

this story was amazing. it made me cry.

Wow...

Wow... This is one awesome story. Actually, this is the best story I've ever read at literotica.com. This is unbelievable stuff...you should think about publishing your work. With a lot more details and twists, this could be New York Bestseller! You've got me hanging onto every single sentence. The way you capured the emotions is really beautiful and touching. This story provoked so much feeling that coursed through me. Thanx for showing a man/man relationship that's about love and not lust. Awesome job. Can you email me at cinnamon_rose88@yahoo.com? I have some questions. Thanx.

mmmm big {content} sigh

What a love story. You made me cry 3 times DWSimon. Your words conveyed all the emotions and sensuality felt by two lovers with the added twist of inner struggles and surrendering. Can't wait for the next one.

Fantastic

I can't add anything more than what others have said, but this is indeed the best story I have read here at Literotica so far. Thank you so much for writing it! No more details required, it was perfect.

Wonderful!

Dear DWSimon,
You are a very good writer! I loved everything about your story, both the emotions and the sex. It couldn't be done any better.

You bastard

You made me cry you bastard. LOL ;) I don't even know what to say, I am truly in awe...

Absolutely wonderful

I can't believe how good this story is. It is absolutely fantastic, and I loved every part of it. I never thought i'd cry from an erotic story, but this was more than that and really pulled it out of me. You're a genius.

wonderful

I never cry ... just wonderful

Just beautiful

That was one of the most affirming, bittersweet erotic stories I've ever read. And you developed the relationship between Max and Sam with such painstaking care that their emotional reactions (especially Sam's) were utterly believable. This was a rare jewel to find -- you really do combine love and hot, sweaty passion in a way that works. Now I'm going to have to go read all of your other stories.

some of the best writing ever!

this is a touchingly sweet, yet erotic story. You are a person of great talent. keep up the great work!

Love This Good

Reading this makes me want to get together with my special friend and make sweet sensual love all day.

Awsome

Wow, I read that story and was in tears like some of your other readers said I don't cry at stories never had but that just touched me. I read all kinds of stories, I'm a 24 year old girl who loves men but I think love is love it dose not matter who the 2 people are and this story cements that idea. You are a wonderful writer, that could be a screen play for a movie it was so good. So please write more.

Beautiful

Absolutley Beautiful. The emotions are wonderful and the love is apparent. Please write more stories like this.

Gorgeous!

I'm a 24 y/o chick who loves women and the idea of men loving other men. It was a beautiful story, truly touching to the heart. Sexy, sensual, full of awakening and discovery. Keep on writing!

amazing

im a 30 y/o married woman and it was simply one of the best stories i ever read

WOW

That was a great story! It kept me from going to bed cause I just couldn't stop reading ... I only hope that one day I will meet a man like these guys did! And hopefully feel the same way .. very hard to come by in the gay world ! Happy reading guys (and gals)

Beautiful Story

This is possibly one of the best erotic stories I have ever read. Well written, thoughtful, and very interesting.It's nice to see someone who can craft a good story that's also very erotic. I personally loved the morality of the characters and the protagonist's struggle to come to terms with his feelings. I wish more writers would take as much care with their stories. Keep up the good work! and thank you.

Thank you for the experience it was to read.

This is a really wonderful story.
I like it for the care and love put into this story. It's not just sex, it is so much more. It made me tear up more than once, and that does not happen often.
Keep writing, for heaven's sake!

Girl, 18

Touching

Wow, I'm a 29yr old woman who hopes that the sweet sentiment of this story happens for me one day. I loved it!

I cried too

I am amazed at the amount of care you put into the characters and how life-like they are. Like some of the other readers said, your story brought me to tears. Thank you for sharing your writing with all of us, it's so beautiful.

WOW

That was a simply amazing story. You should write a novel of short stories ! I am a straight married female and your stories are amazing.

sniffle

Okay, pass the kleenex.

*sniffle* Loved your story. What more can I say? I've read two of your stories now, and I'm determined to read them all. Excellent work.

Wonderful!

That story was absolutely wonderful! It really spoke to me. Up till now I felt the same as the charecter in the story, when I was with another guy it was just sex! But now I know that what I need is to truly BE with someone, share intimate moments with them, and truly love them.

Thank you.

Dave XX

EXHAUSTED

What a story - one of the finest I have encountered for a long time. I lived through every orgasm - every pulse of their cum filled me with excitement and sexual feeling. More please

UUUUUHHHHHH so great

this story with its climax and all of its excitment and love and hate and sex was WONDER_FULLLLL i loved it great story

I loved this story, please keep writing

I was reading this story as a 29 year old married woman, this is how I feel about my husband and him about me, it was beautiful, I wish everyone gay and straight could find their perfect mate, what respect and love, you are a great writer, I like reading, but it takes a good writer to keep me reading, thank you, your verry talented,

Fantastic!

That is THE greatest story that I have ever read...keep up the AMAZING work!!!

Dude, you rock!

Dude, what can I say?

Me and my life partner Ty were just reading over the siory and we we're blown away. It's so cool how you can kinda capture the essence of pure love and the struggles that some have to go through in order to appreciate the totality of it. The sex-come-love making scenes were great too, but your style of writing is what made the whole thing phenominal.

Again, thanks for the great story dude, and we'll catch you up laters.

Much love and deepest respect.

xxx

Sky and Ty

Perfect

A beautiful story. Like the other lady who posted a couple of comments ago, this is exactly how I feel about my husband. Love stories like this are wonderful!

WOW

That was one of the stories I have read in a long time, the characters are wonderfully believable and remind me of myself despite being a straight(ish) female. Please keep writing!

Awesome...

...in it's oridginal context, D. I haven't gotten through all of your stories yet, (though, I have every intention of doing so) but everytime I read another I see why I keep coming (no pun intended) back for more.I was gonna say "You Rock" but Sky beat me to it...LOL

Yeah, I cried too

What a sweet story.

beautiful!

That was a very tender, beautiful piece of work. Very true to my heart. It sounds like the very stuff I write, but I could only hope to touch the tenderness and grace demonstrated in this story! I really enjoy the fact that most of the people who worked with Sam were supportive or accepting of his orientation. That is something you don't often encounter these days (at least, I've never really encountered it, especially in the fire service.)
Thank you for submitting such a wonderful story. I will look for more of your work in the future!

another wonderful story

Its seems you are not capable of writing anything except wonderful romantic love stories and I am truly grateful to have found your work on here. Thank you so much, please keep writing :)
Marie xx

loved it!

sooo beautiful...heartfelt, pure, wonderful!

Outstanding work !

Your work is truly amazing, sir. You have a gift. Lots of men and women out there admire you. You should publish. Self-publishing with agencies like Lulu Pub, GLB Pub or Dorrance may be the way to go. You are good !

when?

when are you ever going to write a story i hate? i=) 've been reading all your stories today, b/c i just couldn't stop! everyone of them is perfect with real characters and everlasting love. thank you for your stories and don't ever stop writing!

Hi, I'm just a straight, gay, or [momentarily] confused teen. Originally, my intention was to find a story on this site for a heated, sensual, stroking session. I didn't think I'd find a story this beautiful and inspirational. Thank you :)

So emotional

As a straight brit girl I sat down to read a nice bit of gay erotica.... I finish with tears streaming down my face and being totally captivatied by your story.
Thank you so much for taking time to write such a georgous tale.
I will be reading more of your postings for sure.
Really truly wonderful stuff... sniff... grin.

Thank you

I just wanted to say thank you very much for all of your stories.

a well written pleasure

if only all the stories on this site were this good. i like the feeling of connection with the story.

The Fire of Love

What's to say? Here's another marvelous story of excellent sex and superb loving written by D.W.'s sensitive & creative mind. 'Nuff said. I love it.

Beautiful

This story is so beautiful and loving.