The story promised more then it delivered in terms of sinister occult and nefarious mind control methods. The action was generic , but the contrast of straight arrow, semi-repressed , female detective in debauched setting was very nice. Nice to see skilled author tentatively exploring new genres . I only wish this particular experiment hadn't terminated so early and easily in B & D experience.
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Some Detectives Rock!
Sara Got Her Woman By Way Of Orgasm! Very Enjoyable Story! Too Short!
Great piece of detective!
Loved it. Hope we'll see Detective Delaney one day...
Truncated meaning but heated action
The story promised more then it delivered in terms of sinister occult and nefarious mind control methods. The action was generic , but the contrast of straight arrow, semi-repressed , female detective in debauched setting was very nice. Nice to see skilled author tentatively exploring new genres . I only wish this particular experiment hadn't terminated so early and easily in B & D experience.
Love it!
Great writing! The ending seemed a bit abrupt... Still love it though!
nothing to do with Valentino's day, but great story n writting!
nothing to do with Valentino's day, but great story n writting!
It needs a few follow up chapters! Lol
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