Don't like the direction of the dynamic. Punishment out of proportion to the violation. Seems more M/s than Daddy/little. Feels like you misled us by the use of 'daddy.' I am happily astounded that Chloe dropped the ball. Tears of happiness for that.
As always, I appreciate your input. I agree that the punishment was out of league with her offense. Before I wrote this chapter, I spoke to the real Chloe. I asked her what should happen in this chapter. She requested "punished hard". I asked her if she wanted Chloe punished hard, or "omg, kinda-hard-to-read hard.." (my exact words.)
She asked for the latter, and since I know she is the type of girl that won't use her safeword, I used the ball, and had the man in the story force her to stop him, as a way of proving that he will stop... to further the trust between them,
I am thrilled that you enjoy the story, and I love your input. Please don't hold back.
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Anonymous02/04/16
Annabell
So far I am in love with the entire Chole's Game. I think it is more M/s but I still love it. Well written and a very good example of the devotion of a sub/slave/pet. Love It!
English
One lucky girl
I've said it before. More than a little jealous.
wtf
Don't like the direction of the dynamic. Punishment out of proportion to the violation. Seems more M/s than Daddy/little. Feels like you misled us by the use of 'daddy.' I am happily astounded that Chloe dropped the ball. Tears of happiness for that.
To anonymous, thank you.
As always, I appreciate your input. I agree that the punishment was out of league with her offense. Before I wrote this chapter, I spoke to the real Chloe. I asked her what should happen in this chapter. She requested "punished hard". I asked her if she wanted Chloe punished hard, or "omg, kinda-hard-to-read hard.." (my exact words.)
She asked for the latter, and since I know she is the type of girl that won't use her safeword, I used the ball, and had the man in the story force her to stop him, as a way of proving that he will stop... to further the trust between them,
I am thrilled that you enjoy the story, and I love your input. Please don't hold back.
Annabell
So far I am in love with the entire Chole's Game. I think it is more M/s but I still love it. Well written and a very good example of the devotion of a sub/slave/pet. Love It!
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