I am a Married Woman

No

Just some zoo sex.

Really?

Really? No comments...1*

Sorry

i'm not really one for negative comments, as people try and provide for us pervs and without them we wouldn't have our "material" but "married for 50 years" so at least 68, so she should be retired. Unfortunately that was the best bit of the story.

What ????

I ever so often commented on storys about woman over 55 and even older or like this one being close to 70 cheating on theyr husbands,writers please give us a brake and avoid writing about things like that because it's just too close to impossible,i don't denie them a sex life but cheating ? creampies ? i think even in couple they would be happy and lucky having sex at all
This doesn't deserve more than a 1 * for effort and even that is far fetched

"married woman and have been for fifty years" lets see married at 16 she would be at least 66 most likely closer to 73. Still working at that age? Men still after her? Hair color is whatever is in the box.

so is she married for money; nope, no money there?
it can't be for love, because she doesn't show any

70 with 38 Ds

Hot. 2

"I was so shocked."

"I went back to work and realized that my panties had been completely been taken off. I wanted to asked "who took my panties" but of course I couldn't do that. "

Just a sample, fellow commenters, its really that stupid.

Logic?

Maybe you are just a lousy proofreader: 50 years? If so, and she is still paying on the mortgage: what a 40 year one? Also, the shot on her hubby's "little dick." Did she not notice that after 50 years and only after she finally is groped, etc. after working in the same place with the same co-workers, who had not touched her for X years? Was there a beam from an alien ship that triggered these new sensations?

Have to agree with everyone else

I think you should map out the ages and timeframe before you start the story. I have to do that on paper before I start writing. That way you can refer to it whenever you want to mention an age, timeframe, or year. If the numbers don't match it can kill the story. A 50 year old woman can still be hot, but a woman who has been married for 50 years is not hot. She's just old. Plus you gave her huge tits, which would more than likely look like deflated balloons.

Better luck next time.

WACC

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I stopped reading when

you said she was married for fifty years and guys were hitting on her. I can only stand so much fiction.

Simple math

If she has been married for fifty years and got married early at age 20, that means she's 70 years old. And since she's not a movie star and hasn't paid for all types professional help to "age" well, that means she's just an old woman that NO ONE is flirting with or even giving a second look to. So this whole story is a joke. 1 star.

Groped at Work

"Groped at work" is an interesting premise, with much potential, but not very well done here. My wife has been groped at work, and it has created an intgeresting dynamic in our relationship,.Although she doesn't encourage it, she does (reluctantly) gets aroused by it. She is the Human Resources director of a small US sales arm of a foreign electronics company, making commercial, big-ticket electronics. She gets very well paid, and we would find it difficult to forego her salary. Being the Human Resources director, she has no one to complain to but herself. She has talked to the president of the company about it, but since she has been groped by salesmen and techs that would be hard to replace, he has said as long as it doesn't get too out of hand, he is reluctant to risk losing his good sealesmen and techs. Besides which, other women who work there, both married and single get groped too, and they also don't want to lose their jobs.
One postitive thing about it is it has really kicked up our sex life!

Great topic, fun

I am also a married woman and love being noticed, especially by the younger men and women that I work with. Nothing so dramatic as lights out groping in the file room but fun none the less. A bit light in writing but a good storyline that I can easily identify with. Keep writing. Xoxoxoxo Annette

Never too old

I noticed that several commentators made mention of the fact our central character had been married for at least 50 years. Many said it was fiction. In some cases it may be fiction but I have at least 10 females that I know that fit the criteria and each is very much involved in the types of activity presented here. Not a lot of cosmetic surgery or that sort of thing, just good taking care of a precious body is what is required. I'm 41 and I find bi 70+ lovers, male and female, a great time. Xoxoxoxo Annette

COULD BE BETTER!

When I read this story I assumed it was your first or second story and was about to offer constructive criticism, but then I checked your Bio page. You are certainly no newcomer to the game. The comments on this story were brutal, but there were some you really should consider. You should also reread the comment entitled ‘Constructive Criticism’ for your story ‘Going out with Friends.’ That writer’s advice would greatly help you.

For the most part the comments about age problems were good, if we assume the men involved were under forty. You wrote about a sixty-eight or above woman without setting up a background that places her out of the normal for a grandmother. What younger readers don’t understand is there are women in their seventies that are very sexy and mature men recognize their potential.

Now—when you move into that age group, if you want to be realistic, which you should be if you want a really good story, the rules change somewhat. There should be no acrobatics in the bedroom—straight old missionary style or cowgirl or doggie is realistic. Another taboo is this shit of calling them a slut, whore, bitch, or any of the other crap the younger generation seems to think is sexy. Also you’ll have a more erotic AND more realistic story if you spend more time in the buildup, have ONE really good loving session (notice I said loving, not fucking—at that age tenderness is everything) move on to afterglow and if you want, maybe a second time after a reasonable time for both to recharge. Remember a certain amount of soreness will be present unless a lot of K-Y has been used.

Some readers may argue with this info about grandmothers. To them I say that I meet with a group of seniors almost every morning for breakfast and talk. An eighty three year old grandmother, with looks that will give any man a woody, is part of the group. I regularly watch men from their forties to their eighties trying to make her.

Anyway this advice is worth exactly what it cost you. Good Luck. Oh Yeah I gave you a 3.

What are all of you? 18?

OK, first, it's a fantasy, you know, literature, second it's probably one proofing error, so get over the age thing already. So what are you all, 21 (14?)? I can remember being 21 when one of my friends if the same age told me that he had been screwing one of the 40 year old women from work. I was horrified, who would want to fuck a 40 year old, that's almost dead, isn't it? Well, no, it isn't. Neither is 70. A funny thing happens when you get older, your perspective changes like walking down the street and seeing different buildings or even different sides of the same building. Not all buildings look the same and different ones, new or old, are attractive to different people.

I'm 62, my wife is 70. We have been married for 32 years. Before we got married, I have had sex with a LOT of women (college and right after, mostly, the 70s and 80s were different). While at 21 I couldn't imagine wanting to fuck a 40 year old, at 62 I can't imagine wanting to fuck a 21 year old, or even a 30 year old. Yes, it is true that my wife's breasts (she hates the word "tits" so I will respect her) are not as firm as when we first met, but they are still 38Cs and her nipples are still directly connected to her clit. She is the hottest woman I have ever slept with. Men still hit on her. Men at parties still manage a squeeze/brush her boobs now and then (she's ok with boobs). As you would expect, we have a lot of friends of the same vintage. 70 year old women are wonderful fucks. My wife is better than she was 30 years ago, so don't discount them and don't know them until you have tried them.

As for the rest of the story, a little unbelievable, but still fun. I gave it a 4. It's got a good beat and you can dance to it. Oh, sorry you youngsters have no idea what that reference is about. For those of you that do, you probably like fucking older women, too and know exactly what I am talking about.

68?

Who would do all that to a 68 year old woman? let alone eat it later?

This is misdiagnosed and belongs in the nonconsent column. It was nonconsent in placing it under "loving wives"

Very choppy, totally unrealistic and fantasy or not, just plain dumb.....

.....I would suggest you go back to what you have done best at, and in all cases, get some editorial help, if you're not willing or disciplined enough to edit and revamp your own work.
Sorry, I'd like to offer more supportive comment, but this was just lousy, and I won't waste anyone's time blowing sunshine up your skirts.