I believe this is the first I've read of your stories...enjoyed it. Can't wait for chapter 2.
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Anonymous02/04/16
what's with
What's with all and frequent use of "word..." all through the story, doesn't anyone now days know basic standard grammar and how to properly use it. Making this junk construct in place a a coma or semi-colon, maybe just ending the sentence shows a poor education.
Ignore Mr. Anon What's With. We don't need English teachers critiquing works on the site. Go back to your students.
Now that I got that out of the way, I enjoyed your story very much. Loved the build up. Good to see it didn't happen all at once.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Although he learned a lot he needs more practice.
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Anonymous02/04/16
I for one didn't even notice any faults in your grammar, sentence construction etc, I was far too busy enjoying your story. Thank you, and I shall await the second part.
Please keep up the story line. I promise to be patient if it takes time, I have readers bellowing at me constantly about the length of time between chapters. I'm quite enjoying their interplay. Guess we all could have used an aunt like Siobhan, eh?
This was an absolutely WONDERFUL and amazing story! A most deliciously piece of true pornography...so well thought out and written that no photographs are even necessary! This great story teller produced a perfect and evocative "mind video." Please... PLEASE...give us a sequel! Now, as to content...a delightful and absolutely plausible incestuous relationship! I also grew up the youngest in a family of women, with a beautiful Mom and two hot older sisters. (Dad left when I was one year old. My Mom just couldn't be faithful to just one man!) So, those scenes of female bodies in various state of undress, discovery of deliciously scented panties in the hamper well before puberty and other hot delights, are REAL! But, I went the "other" direction...I learned to LOVE feminine underwear and clothing, sexy shoes, hair and makeup AND...*sigh*... MEN! Soooo...I can really identify with Vonnie's hunger for Danny's hot body and luscious cock, especially her sucking him off for the first time! Mmmmm...soooo delicious! The greatest connection to this story though, is that my first lover was my own male cousin, who was two years older than I, bigger than I and so much more streetwise than I, so, I very intimately know Danny's desire and love for his Vonnie! I'd had a secret crush on Cuz for years until, just after my 18th birthday, Fate intervened and we became lovers! As a homosexual male, I had only TWO warm, wet holes to please my lover with, but, from the very first, I set about to use my body to give him every drop of sexual pleasure and fulfillment I possibly could! And, for the many years we were together, my cousin's moans and exclamations of ecstasy...as well as hundreds of exquisite climaxes, assured me of my success! So, as a gay man, I can't wait to find out how Vonnie finds Danny's luscious cock in that "final hole"! Mmmm...
Once more you create a story that is not only erotic, but it is entertaining as well. You give the subtle hints of a possible romance or lingering desire oh so well.Well written as your pieces usually are, I look forward to seeing more of this series! Thank you!
...simply wow. Excellent story by any standards. 15 stars should suffice
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Anonymous02/14/16
The long introduction to the characters truly made the story mich steamier.
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Anonymous02/14/16
auntie panties
Very exciting story!!I can feel the guy's excitation ,coming crescendo,while sniffing his aunt's panties till fucking her.I have smelt dozen of panties,some so wet with the pussies' moisture and the smell of piss!These owners of these panties were those of my three sisters,their friends,five aunts and some Mom's friend while they stayed home. I have been able to fuck ONLY one of my aunties when I was 17 and her 39.She was divorced since 5 years.During the same year,I had close touchings with one of my sisters.however,she never let me fuck her when she stayed home.I succeeded to fuck her 12 years after her marriage while I was spending holidays at her place and she was not going well with her husband who was cheating on her.I am now married and I have the chance to have a wife who knows my taboo relations and my likes of panties'sniffing! and from time to time she let me fuck my aunt and my sister but with a special condition that I let them put love bites on me and then to narrate her the sexual time spent with them AND IN DETAILS!!!She is also very excited when sometimes I bring home,at her request, my aunt's and sister's dirty panties which she also smell together with meWhen I fuck her and narrate her these details,she becomes like mad and cries,scrathing my body,putting love bites on my neck and all over my body,She also tells me very dirty words AND VERY OFTEN ,when she cums ,she squirts, that very often we have to change our mattress.Fortunately,our neighbours' houses are at a respectable distance and we do not have any children.Furthermore,though she let me fuck my aunt and sister,up to now she is not willing to have a threesome.But I am sure this will happen one of these days.But I shall have to persuade my aunt and sister who think that our taboo relation is a great secret!!If they knew about my wife,I think they will be shocked!!
agree the long buildup just made it better...
very likable characters...!
looking forward to your other stories!
favorited both story and you
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Anonymous03/08/16
passion
loved it. great build-up. very sexy description of aunt, and great descriptive writing when they were fucking. love the panties element of the story. very clever. he's a lucky guy, buried balls-deep in someone who really cares for him. more please !
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Anonymous03/30/16
I luuuuved it.
The long buildup and sexy, erotic and kinky description with the whole personalities of the characters just made it so much better. In 100/10 stars should be good.
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Anonymous04/06/16
GREAT!
Please...needs that chapter...and what happens later...thinking they'll be moving to Vancouver together.
I usually stay away from the incest stuff but the panty smelling lured me in. Story was very well written with very few typos or grammatical errors. Good job. BTW I'm also Scots/Irish so I also have a skewed outlook for the redheaded ladies. Keep 'em coming (stories that is)!
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Anonymous04/16/16
What's with?
Don't understand how a grammar perfectionist could not know the difference between a comma and a coma!
Boy,do these two belong together!
Why is it that the perfect sex in so many cases is forbidden,with the person you know best?!
These two were born to be a couple!
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Anonymous07/22/16
That was so HOT
Felt the same about my aunt, at 60 STILL DREAMING ABOUT HER. Great story !!!
English
Really great start!
I believe this is the first I've read of your stories...enjoyed it. Can't wait for chapter 2.
what's with
What's with all and frequent use of "word..." all through the story, doesn't anyone now days know basic standard grammar and how to properly use it. Making this junk construct in place a a coma or semi-colon, maybe just ending the sentence shows a poor education.
English teacher?
Ignore Mr. Anon What's With. We don't need English teachers critiquing works on the site. Go back to your students.
Now that I got that out of the way, I enjoyed your story very much. Loved the build up. Good to see it didn't happen all at once.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Although he learned a lot he needs more practice.
I for one didn't even notice any faults in your grammar, sentence construction etc, I was far too busy enjoying your story. Thank you, and I shall await the second part.
One word
BRILLIANT !!!!!!!
Outstanding!
Completely enjoyable! Can't wait for the next instalment of this story.
THIS is my jam!!!!
Awesome fun! When my aunt gets home from work I'm gonna tell her to read this! :-D
Loved it
Great story, extremely well written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a pleasure
Loved the story, it was a pleasure to read a story written by someone with more than two brain cells.
Well done!
Please keep up the story line. I promise to be patient if it takes time, I have readers bellowing at me constantly about the length of time between chapters. I'm quite enjoying their interplay. Guess we all could have used an aunt like Siobhan, eh?
Once again, bravo.
- BH
AMAZING!
This was an absolutely WONDERFUL and amazing story! A most deliciously piece of true pornography...so well thought out and written that no photographs are even necessary! This great story teller produced a perfect and evocative "mind video." Please... PLEASE...give us a sequel! Now, as to content...a delightful and absolutely plausible incestuous relationship! I also grew up the youngest in a family of women, with a beautiful Mom and two hot older sisters. (Dad left when I was one year old. My Mom just couldn't be faithful to just one man!) So, those scenes of female bodies in various state of undress, discovery of deliciously scented panties in the hamper well before puberty and other hot delights, are REAL! But, I went the "other" direction...I learned to LOVE feminine underwear and clothing, sexy shoes, hair and makeup AND...*sigh*... MEN! Soooo...I can really identify with Vonnie's hunger for Danny's hot body and luscious cock, especially her sucking him off for the first time! Mmmmm...soooo delicious! The greatest connection to this story though, is that my first lover was my own male cousin, who was two years older than I, bigger than I and so much more streetwise than I, so, I very intimately know Danny's desire and love for his Vonnie! I'd had a secret crush on Cuz for years until, just after my 18th birthday, Fate intervened and we became lovers! As a homosexual male, I had only TWO warm, wet holes to please my lover with, but, from the very first, I set about to use my body to give him every drop of sexual pleasure and fulfillment I possibly could! And, for the many years we were together, my cousin's moans and exclamations of ecstasy...as well as hundreds of exquisite climaxes, assured me of my success! So, as a gay man, I can't wait to find out how Vonnie finds Danny's luscious cock in that "final hole"! Mmmm...
Loved it
Great story, as a 36 year old guy who's been shafting aunty and mother over a number of years I found it to very stimulating hope there's more to come
Definitely needs more chapters...
but FIVE STARS is what you deserve so far!
Could it have gotten any hotter??
Could this story been any hotter? Absolutely NOT!! 5 stars just ain't enough for this one!!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Love your way of making the reader feel as though they are the boy... wow
Keep writing , It is so invigorating..
Great.
I just love a great panty sniffing story. I was sniffing a pair as I reading this very hot story. Thanks for writing it.
Very Good A for Effort
Once more you create a story that is not only erotic, but it is entertaining as well. You give the subtle hints of a possible romance or lingering desire oh so well.Well written as your pieces usually are, I look forward to seeing more of this series! Thank you!
WOW
Good story, and super hot rated at least a 7 just for the pure lust
WOW
...simply wow. Excellent story by any standards. 15 stars should suffice
The long introduction to the characters truly made the story mich steamier.
auntie panties
Very exciting story!!I can feel the guy's excitation ,coming crescendo,while sniffing his aunt's panties till fucking her.I have smelt dozen of panties,some so wet with the pussies' moisture and the smell of piss!These owners of these panties were those of my three sisters,their friends,five aunts and some Mom's friend while they stayed home. I have been able to fuck ONLY one of my aunties when I was 17 and her 39.She was divorced since 5 years.During the same year,I had close touchings with one of my sisters.however,she never let me fuck her when she stayed home.I succeeded to fuck her 12 years after her marriage while I was spending holidays at her place and she was not going well with her husband who was cheating on her.I am now married and I have the chance to have a wife who knows my taboo relations and my likes of panties'sniffing! and from time to time she let me fuck my aunt and my sister but with a special condition that I let them put love bites on me and then to narrate her the sexual time spent with them AND IN DETAILS!!!She is also very excited when sometimes I bring home,at her request, my aunt's and sister's dirty panties which she also smell together with meWhen I fuck her and narrate her these details,she becomes like mad and cries,scrathing my body,putting love bites on my neck and all over my body,She also tells me very dirty words AND VERY OFTEN ,when she cums ,she squirts, that very often we have to change our mattress.Fortunately,our neighbours' houses are at a respectable distance and we do not have any children.Furthermore,though she let me fuck my aunt and sister,up to now she is not willing to have a threesome.But I am sure this will happen one of these days.But I shall have to persuade my aunt and sister who think that our taboo relation is a great secret!!If they knew about my wife,I think they will be shocked!!
Smoking!
agree the long buildup just made it better...
very likable characters...!
looking forward to your other stories!
favorited both story and you
passion
loved it. great build-up. very sexy description of aunt, and great descriptive writing when they were fucking. love the panties element of the story. very clever. he's a lucky guy, buried balls-deep in someone who really cares for him. more please !
I luuuuved it.
The long buildup and sexy, erotic and kinky description with the whole personalities of the characters just made it so much better. In 100/10 stars should be good.
GREAT!
Please...needs that chapter...and what happens later...thinking they'll be moving to Vancouver together.
Great Story
I usually stay away from the incest stuff but the panty smelling lured me in. Story was very well written with very few typos or grammatical errors. Good job. BTW I'm also Scots/Irish so I also have a skewed outlook for the redheaded ladies. Keep 'em coming (stories that is)!
What's with?
Don't understand how a grammar perfectionist could not know the difference between a comma and a coma!
The Purrfect Couple!
Boy,do these two belong together!
Why is it that the perfect sex in so many cases is forbidden,with the person you know best?!
These two were born to be a couple!
That was so HOT
Felt the same about my aunt, at 60 STILL DREAMING ABOUT HER. Great story !!!
Love it!
It's so yummy! Thank you!
Sweet story
I like how you built the relationship. Well done.
More
I wonder what would happen if his mother finds out what he is up to and wants to join in on the fun.
Let me know what you think.
rjb49@bellsouth.net
Delicious
Absolutely delicious.
You've done it again
Another brilliant story so far. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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