Helping Hands Ch. 02

Far to brief

I'm enjoying this story, but please make the chapters longer. Maybe you could shoot for 2 pages at a time. What you give the reader is far less than one page. I may loose interest if you keep just dribbling out the story. Just too frustrating.

Have to agree

I am enjoying the story very much. You bring a lot do mages in your writing. Too slow a pace. Look forward to more, but make them longer.

Well done

I am enjoying your story very much. Thank for taking the time to share - work at your own creative pace.

Great so far

I also think the story could benefit from waiting till you at least have a couple of pages till you post the next part.

Nicely Done

I agree with bobenjoys183, except I like the pace. The images, and mom's guilt at her suddenly beating Tony off, were kind of touching. We all know where this will lead. And we still have her trip to come. Will she tell Carly what she is doing, and urge her to follow the lead? Or will she let the sister find her own way?

Yes, Mom and her son need to go further and his sister needs to know what she can do for him too when Mom is away.... Hot and nice start. Thank you.

Good one...but too short!

One just gets started reading and the chapter is over...would be more enjoyable if it lasted longer!

Good story

Quite a few mom's have given son a helping hand. The results are usually positive and rewarding.

Mom has needs too!

Maybe they could help each other out? One hand washes the other so to speak. I think the next time mom should only wear a nighty with no panties. They can do a little sixty-nine action before taking a rocket ride!

He can help her , too!

All he has to do is let her get on top... I think she might just REALLY like THAT!

a little longer or a little faster

your story was overall good..good work..but try to make them a little longer or maybe write faster..looking forward to reading the next chapters!!

anon about the thermometer and dentures

Dude. Wtf.

Grandmas not here and mercury or alcohol with glass anywhere near an unsuspecting anus is unnecessary.

Don't be so crass when it comes to ass.

I like it

Great so far but there needs to be more plot and also romance also when you tie the sister in maby make it like she's always loved him

Great

Great plot, but why so short chapters? And I felt it moved a bit to fast... It should take a bit longer before the first sexual contact

Enjoyable but short

I am enjoying your story but the chapters are to short. Your chapters seem more like you writing about an event rather then a chapter in a story. This choice may not be my favorite but I am enjoying your writing. At least they are posted each day. Please continue

Thanks For The Read***

A little short but still a good read.

annoyingly short

probably meant as a tease but has the opposite effect