David and Angela

could be a good story

This could be a good story. I'm sure if you had an editor, the story would read much better. The premise is good, but I don't think it is the correct way to tell a story.

Right now, I think there is a problem on Literotica with their volunteer editor program. You may have contacted someone, but not received a response. I understand that there is a glitch. Instead, contact an editor by going in through their profile page, etc.

She could have ended it by changing her number when she moved

re: it could be a good story

Thanks--I am new here and the especially low rating for my first story is indeed a bit disappointing. I have another story currently awaiting approval so I hope that one gets better ratings. I am sure it is a good suggestion to seek the help of an editor but because I'm new I wasn't sure--and in fact still am not sure--the best way to approach getting an editor. I sent a private message to someone who indicated in the forums a willingness to edit during February so hopefully that person can either help me or direct me to the correct approach for getting such help.

Pretty good

I can't wait to see what the other chapters have in store

This is disturbing as f*ck. What in the hell is wrong with you?