The Right Man

Good start

Needs another chapter to get him off probation and maybe marriage

He's on Probation for 18 months

A second chapter, if written, would deal with the acrimony between Chrissy and Ron McCusker, her former supervisor. Ron's already jealous over Chrissy's relationship with Taylor. That dynamic could lead to some compelling conflict.

Enjoyed it but...

...it seemed rushed to me and incomplete. I think you have a chance for a few more chapters expanding the couples trials and tribulations as their relationship grows into the happily ever after that you are actually going after.

Taylor and Chrissie

Please write another chapter! Taylor seems a sexy guy, strong and "there when you need him." He's also good in bed, and I'll bet with a sexy cock, pubes, and some hair for that strong sexy chest.

Thanks All

Thanks to all who read this story, and especially those who took the time to comment. I just might expand this into another chapter or chapters. However, as is the norm for all my stories, the sex scenes will be incidental to the ongoing conflict and hopefully resolution that defines most relationships.

Dear Author, Neat love story with a happy ending. Thank you, jntiques

Almost but not quite

For me, it would have been better if they had recognized their mutual feelings, worked together to get him through the required classes, pay off his fines, and then get together.
or
Step into Ron's office and explain her stress level following the attack, that he had been a gentleman and helped her get home safely, and request that because of the inadvertent contact after hours, he be removed from her case load and transferred to another agent. Friendship progresses to romance. No violation of policy or harassment needed.

Good story, but...

A very good story, but that needs a continuation. Obviously, another chapter could follow the line that the author has described, but you have to think that this could endanger the relationship with Taylor, since he will not tolerate anyone hurting Chrissie.
5 * for you, and waiting for another chapter to be published.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.