All Comments on 'Father-Son Date Mother-Daughter Pt. 01'

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 8 years ago
Please do!

Continue, that is!

ymmvymmvabout 8 years ago
Very erotic with good characters

Thought this was an interesting and very erotic story. It kept my attention and strongly aroused me as well. I'm definitely going to check out some more of the author's contributions.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 8 years ago
Fucking HOT!!!

I love this one - great story!

arrowglassarrowglassabout 8 years ago
Hooked on another of your tall tales!

Oh the possibilities of this series...as I wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
The Circle and now this

I have been trying to recover from "The Circle" ending but this is going to save the day!!

NewYorkeroticNewYorkeroticabout 8 years ago
I like it.

I'm 62, but around twenty-five years ago, I heard a news item on the radio about a 64-year-old guy who broke up with his 27-year-old girlfriend because "she didn't know the songs."

At the time, I thought that was a stupid reason to break up with someone, but I thought of that as I read the beginning of this very satisfying first part, which to me exemplifies what I call the hippie ideal. Now, the cynic may scoff at that with derision. But why? In this story, after some initial hesitation and reservation on the part of one, four consenting adults enter freely and openly into a passionate and meaningful and loving relationship without regard for archaic social conventions predicated on obsolescent property relations. Where is the harm? Unlike far too many other stories on this site, this is a joyous and ecumenical tale in which no one is hurt and everyone is happy. Sneer if one will, but that sounds wonderful to me. I know that I would love to live that way if only I could find it in the tangible world outside of the realm of the beautiful imagination.

SoNaughtySoNaughtyalmost 8 years ago
MMMMMMMMMMMMM Very Interesting Story!

OMG I love it. I have always wanted to do that but no one to do it with cause I am alone. My family is not like me. I am the naughty one in the family whom they call the blacksheep of the family. But if a Dad and son and their girlfriend wants to get together I am willing. Love the story that much and it made me get ideas in my head that is so naughty especially from my bisexual point of view too ,

ymmvymmvover 5 years ago
Very arousing story

This is awesomely hot!! Hope there's more!! I'm hard as a rock from reading it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sensual, Sexy and Warm

Very well written, Alot of genuine feelings and a lot of fine, tender and very hot sex. Five stars from Holland!

oldtwitoldtwitabout 5 years ago
OH so good

Oh so well written, it just flowed and felt right

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So sucking fucking hot

Oh so sucking fucking depraved and hedonistic, hot beyond all limits, all four generating insane levels of sexual pleasure. Absolutely fucking fabulous, more and more please and soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So real

Was well written. I liked this very much as all the feelings were very natural.

gpetagpetaover 4 years ago

very arousing swapping

interested in part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I could only wish such a thing could happen to me.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
The last thing now is my cock!

AWESOME story.

What man has not had a dream like this!

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Well written .

AngusMAngusMover 1 year ago

I think that I am dreaming and gone to heaven

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

Excellent.. Interesting tale..!! . 5 . !!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

We all know what needs to come next. Mom does daughter, etc., etc., etc., etc.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...