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by Anonymous

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by trigudis02/05/16

An editor looked this over?

No insult intended, but is English your second language? I ask because the narrative voice sounds like it might be. There are numerous flaws in tense and syntax. If English is indeed your second language, you need to get another editor.

Again, no offense.

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by Anonymous02/05/16

I like the premise but.....

....the flaws in your English completely ruined a good story.

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by Anonymous02/12/16

???

this is a skank lesbo story??? you are among the mentally ILL

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by ucantkeeptripping02/19/16

ouch!!!

Thank you for your comments. I'm relieved I did not quit my day job.

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