My Weekend Alone With Sis

bullshit

go back to school and learn about virgins the hymen is about 1" inside the vagina so unless he had a 2" dick he would have popped her with the first thrust you really know how to ruin a story

totally ridiculous

but still something to turn the imagination.

Rubbish

You've written about experienced couples not virgins.

quit

This is one of the worst attempts of writing a story, give up and find something else to do instead of wasting our time reading this garbage.

I thought it was good

alone with sis.

while the story line was at some point believeable, the writing of it left something to be desired. it was very eratic and left you wondering where the story line was. you needmily back ground to really rethink your story and expand it to give some family back ground. build up to your climax.rewrite this and expand it. stories like this should not be a wam-bam, thank you mam affair. make it beliveable.

thankyou author

Oh the joy this brought me. The thought of hot come in my face and powding my sister to no end, just thrilling. To travel to the deeps of usually unalowed territories is amazing for creating an erection. That makes me want to do my innocent, small tit, virgin sister even more. Excellent work for bringing out the taboo side of me.

Let's not and say we didn't

This had potential to be a really nice story. Instead it falls just shy of rape.

Crap

That's all. Crap.

Interesting

I can't decide if its rape or socially awkward incest.

Fucking load of rubbish By a wanker

Fucking load of rubbish By a wanker

Written by a 12 year-old

Complete rubbish, this toxic crap deserves to be shat on and left to fester

boshit

fatkid13-YOU RE PROBABLY ONLY 13 YEARS OLD OR LESS You don t even know what you are talking about so stop writing you only write shit GO FUCK YOURSELVE AND DON T RAPE NOBODY NOT EVEN IN YOUR DREAM FUCK HEAD.

terrible

This is fucking bullshit homie

rape

Guy would have to be real S>O>B> to rape his sister that way. Hope she squeals on him before her tummy gets too big.

take a course

Dude you seriously need to take a writing seminar or read some of the actual stories on this site. mystery, intrigue, and seduction are key to a good story this piece of crap should be tossed

Dude this story was truly ridiculous learn to write better before u post

Please

Don't write anything else, this was beyond awful, beyond anything else I have ever read. Do the world a favor, read but don't write ever again.