All Comments on 'Fun with Jane'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved it

Wow, I'm so fucking wet right now. Very good job on the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
So fuckin good!

Erotic. Delicious. Sexy as all hell.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 8 years ago

Fun with Jane, Amelia - I'll take either one. What a hot encounter between doctor and patient. Tho I must confess, the doctor's last line, "you just may be the best patient I've ever had" was kinda creepy even if it was said jokingly. But nevertheless, this was a good read

gotranegotraneabout 8 years ago
Hot Little Number!!!

Hot story! Gotta, gotta have, at least, a sequel, if not a series! Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Who?

Decent story! Amelia and Jane are the names of the characters, but twice ‘Amanda’ is written. I understand mistakes happen, but I couldn’t get a story published cause I used ‘she’ instead of ‘you’ twice.

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I'm Aly, and I'm a little (mdlg). I like writing, but mostly I like reading about other littles and their mommies.