All Comments on 'The Twelve Tables Ch. 06'

I love this story! And you do it brilliantly.

Fantastic chapter, really plays out the dynamic close nit ways of old family traditions and sibling rivalry. Well done!!!

Ellie, I find most of your stories a delight to read, despite the fact that I often dislike your topics such as submissiveness. This one is progressing particularly well. Thanks for contributing.

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I'm so glad you're continuing this story. I love watching Peri grow. And Josh as well. Can't wait for more! I hope this series has many more chapters to come. Well done!!

After reading (and re-reading) Bella’s story I started this story, and couldn’t stop.

Another great story!

Looking forward reading more about this family and Peri and Josh in particular.

Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us.

Loved Bella and clicked on your name to see what else you wrote and fell into this. Feel like I should get your paypal address so I can pay you for great writing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

I can't be the only person who thinks that the kid's nickname is unfortunate.

I HAD A MOMENT OF BOREDOM, THE OTHER DAY, WHILE READING MY FAVOURITE PARANORMAL ROMANCE SERIES. I CAME ACROSS YOUR STORY AND HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO PUT IT DOWN. I HONESTLY FEEL TRANSPORTED AS IT ALL FEELS SO REAL. IT'S THE WRITING, AND THE WAY IT READS, SO DAMN EASY. AFTER I FINISH THIS MOVIE, I'LL CHECK OUT YOUR OTHER OFFERINGS. I'M SURE I WONT BE DISAPPOINTED. I'M HOPING THAT BY THE TIME I'M FINISHED CH. 20, THAT YOU WILL HAVE TAKEN PITTIE ON US AND WRITTEN A FEW MORE EXCITING CHAPTERS. YOU HAVE SUCH A DETAILED THOUGHT PROCESS, A GIFT. YOU'RE A WONDERFUL WRITER. Kym

Brill. Intriguing family feuds and infighting. Nikki loves her twin a bit too much.