All Comments on 'Father-Son Date Mother-Daughter Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
This guy writes the best stuff

Hot with a plot. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story

Please continue with this story........

arrowglassarrowglassabout 8 years ago
Another "Chart Topper!"

Keep 'em cumming...LOL!!!!!

grouplover12grouplover12about 8 years ago
Ended unfinished

You stopped too soon. You had everyone fucking and sucking everyone EXCEPT father & son. Bet the girls would love that.

mammoetmammoetabout 8 years ago
Great

Keep going , this Needs à few more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

More Please. You need to write about Penny giving up her ass and/or getting DP'd by the guys.

I agree with grouplover12 as well, the men need to try each other as well. I find nothing hotter than full on bi-sex incest. Both males and females enjoying all that each other's bodies have to offer. Both men fucking each other is really hot. Neither one totally dominant over the other one, just two people making each other feel great.

max4990max4990about 8 years ago
Please write more stories.

I must thank you for your uplifting stories. I tire of all the hateful, angry and spiteful stories that show up in this genre. You are a breath of fresh air. Please write more stories. I always look for your stories whenever I log on to this site. In fact, write a book. I'll buy it! Now, write, write, write.

oldwayneoldwayneabout 8 years ago
I HAVE READ YOUR TALES ON THE OTHER SITE (under the other name).

Over there you get TENS, but... here I can only give you FIVES!

tonybear22tonybear22about 8 years ago
keep this going.. good polyamorous story...

keep this going.. good polyamorous story...

SoNaughtySoNaughtyalmost 8 years ago
Love it!

Please keep the story going! I am so wet that I am going to have to make myself cum and get someone to fuck me! MMMMMMMMMMMMM

dglnowdglnowalmost 8 years ago
Keep Going

Please keep this story going. It is so wonderful.

JohnFreeJohnFreeover 7 years ago
PLEASE!!!

What a beautiful story....

I've been blessed in the past to experience Polyamory....who knew that loving more than one increases love for all!!!!

Please bless us devoted readers with more of this wonderful love affair!!!!

RubberuwRubberuwalmost 6 years ago
Great - more Please!

Looking forward to read more on this story line. It was great!!

wagonet2wagonet2over 5 years ago
Wow

Well written and fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So nice, so full of love ...

Thank you for this rwo-parts story, 5-star for each.

Even sounds plausible, what a dream !

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So sucking fucking hot

So decadent debauched, a dream come true fucking and sucking mother and daughter in a hedonistic orgy of insane sexual pleasure, eating cunt and fucking cunt at the same time. The women all making out with each other and a third woman joining the super sexy group in a prolonged orgy of extreme fucking and sucking. Everyone totally fucked into blissed out sexual paradise. I absolutely adore cunt, what would I not give to be able to join a group like this. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So intense

Again this was quite well written. I liked this very much as all the feelings were very natural. Really well done. Everything seemed so natural. Keep it up !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Loved it. Although I thought at the blind fold bit you could have got Todd to suck his dad off. Or at least in the end scene they could have made out. It was really hot though. Hope there is more.

atlgreeneyesatlgreeneyesalmost 3 years ago

This series is so amazing!!! I love the dynamic and how you included Lisa too. Can’t wait to see where this goes!!

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
AWESOME series

What a fantastic ending.

Lisa was a perfect addition to the tale.

Will you continue?

Someone needs to get married or pregnant.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Follow up

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Great series

Wish you would add more chapters

nyteramblernyteramblerover 2 years ago

Yea I agree more chapters would be nice and was a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked part two as well as part one. This would make a great book with illustrations or maybe in comic form like a DC or Marvel Comic book version. (No CGI stuff, it never looks right).

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

YUMMmmmm !! Excellent... . 5 ...!!

WoodencavWoodencav6 months ago

Such a sexy storey ❤️ it. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great story.

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