Can't say I enjoyed it, but it was very well written. 5 stars and lots of luck in the contest.
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Anonymous02/10/16
stereotype Unlce
Maybe not in appearance or with the prison background, but just a creep. So odd that I enjoy incest stories and of all types, but of all the pairings Uncle is the only one I constantly find creepy. The fact he was really of no blood relation made it a little easier to deal with though.
This was an asshole taking advantage of a confused girl. Although not physical, it reeked of abuse to me in a way. I thank you for shying away from it being forceful that would have made it disgusting.
On the other hand the writing was very good, the story itself predictable, but it was a short story so that is the fun in those and the holy toast me laugh and its always nice to smile during a story.
You didn't get a five because 'uncle' was a leering pig, but four for the good stuff. Good luck.
I appreciate you readers taking the time to jot down a comment. I also appreciate the kind words and analysis, the favorites and votes. This has been one of my highest voted stories so far. On to April!
English
Very Good
I skipped the ass licking. Not my thing. I'm sure he got plenty of that in prison.
*****
Can't say I enjoyed it, but it was very well written. 5 stars and lots of luck in the contest.
stereotype Unlce
Maybe not in appearance or with the prison background, but just a creep. So odd that I enjoy incest stories and of all types, but of all the pairings Uncle is the only one I constantly find creepy. The fact he was really of no blood relation made it a little easier to deal with though.
This was an asshole taking advantage of a confused girl. Although not physical, it reeked of abuse to me in a way. I thank you for shying away from it being forceful that would have made it disgusting.
On the other hand the writing was very good, the story itself predictable, but it was a short story so that is the fun in those and the holy toast me laugh and its always nice to smile during a story.
You didn't get a five because 'uncle' was a leering pig, but four for the good stuff. Good luck.
Thank you everyone!
I appreciate you readers taking the time to jot down a comment. I also appreciate the kind words and analysis, the favorites and votes. This has been one of my highest voted stories so far. On to April!
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