I am so glad that someone has started back writing BG stories and post them on this website. I like you as a as an author anyway so that makes it even better. So I can wait and let you develop this story all you want too. I haven't had any good stories to read and probably 2 or more weeks. So thank you thank you
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I am so glad that someone has started back writing BG stories and post them on this website. I like you as a as an author anyway so that makes it even better. So I can wait and let you develop this story all you want too. I haven't had any good stories to read and probably 2 or more weeks. So thank you thank you
Good start
I like the start and can't wait to read more. Quite a twist I didn't see coming.
change of pace
its good somebody is writing storys not describing some lame fetish or telling a fantasy about burning their ex looking forward to reading some more
Interesting!
Really good start! Looking forward to seeing where this story takes us.....
I didn't see that coming!
I don't know where your going with this but what a great start. Not the usual racist b.s. That tries to pass as a story.
*****
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