Good story..Like another person I noticed the change from father to step father..Wondered about that. One of things that short stories lack is details and the ability to build up to an event. This story has the potential to be great if it was longer to further develop the characters and the story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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One inconsistency, he went from father to step-father. Good effort though.
You asshole.
Just kidding. You just had to leave us hanging. Great plot and I love the school out fit look.
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Good story..Like another person I noticed the change from father to step father..Wondered about that. One of things that short stories lack is details and the ability to build up to an event. This story has the potential to be great if it was longer to further develop the characters and the story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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Thank you for your honest comments, apologies for the father/step father error, will edit and change ASAP. :)
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