by meddlesome
This is not non consensual. this catagory really need to be strictly unwanted sex not i love it , i love it,it ,i love it...as for me this is forced sex unwanted without consent this story is a gangbang and master and WILLING SLAVE at best.
It's right there at the beginning. Not sure what the problem is.
I love the way this character and story developed. Yes, please, let us hear about the training.
I think you wrote a mighty good one here!
I will delete your Troll comments. You know why? Because I can. Oh, and all your 1 votes will get removed as well by Lit during sweeps. Get a life. Can't create anything other than bile so you trash others. #Losers
Thanks for reading, as always, and thanks for the feedback.
Her training must continue, she's ready for the makeover to be complete!
I love training day or, should I say, training week. xoxoxoxoxoxo Annette
Let her be a willing intelligent slut. please.
Thank you for chapter 2 to my favorite story on Lit! Please sir, can we have another?
Did I hallucinate reading Chap. 3 the other day but now it's not here???
Wha' happened?
I distinctly recall seeing 3 appear, much awaited as it was [or is?], so I relished reading it, it was fan-fucking-tastic, my only regret now is I didn't copy it as soon as it appeared, as I have some of Meddlesome's fabulous stories!
So please, repost Chap. 3 or at least explain what gives, ok?
All us fans REALLY love your writing!
Loved it. Better than chapter one, hope chapter three will be out soon!!!
When are you publishing chapter 3? I'm looking forward to it :)
There seriously needs to be a chapter 3. I saw mention of a chapter 3. Where is it?
I have not read the story yet, but buy the comments I will be reading it tonight, good for you deleting the troll comments, they are dead shits, I love a good slutty story. You are now in my favourites. Thanks
hell yea we want part 3 and 4 and 5 and onward there is so many places you can go with this one!!!!!!!
Meddlesome. Melissa was the first story I read on the site.. please bring forth the 3 Rd part
Lol
this some pimp ho type shit here trolls respect people opinions fella she need some black dick too or porn if big dick is her poison you need to create stronger women in your stories who got good magical pussy too ha ha
I really want to read Melissa’s Conversion part 3. How long will it take to submit it to your fans?
It has been four years and no further stories have come from the author. I have to admit that it was really nice to hear about how much Melissa is able to orgasm. Way over the top but not unheard of that I lost count of how many times in only a couple of hours. Melissa will be so sore in the morning that she will not be able to move. That is how it would be in a real story but a fantasy I bet she would be ready to go in a couple of hours of rest. Jim is going to have to give Melissa some better aftercare for all the work that she does. She did not have anything to eat for over 14 hours before sending her to bed and very little water or nutrients to provide for her body. Too bad we will not be entertained with her training and what happens the rest of her life. How she is going to tell her parents will be very interesting but they are probably already swingers and have lots of lovers.