All Comments on 'Double Secret'

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ArtemyahDragonianArtemyahDragonianabout 8 years ago
Wow

That seriously blew my mind. I have never read a story like this one before.

JANGGAUJANGGAUabout 8 years ago
MORE!!!!!

Need more please!! Have read it now three times and want to know how things go with parents and friends.

SciFurzSciFurzabout 8 years agoAuthor
@ Artemyah and JANGGAU

Thanks for your praise. :-D

Sometimes I get lucky and create something never done before. ;-)

I did have a few thoughts on the time between the confession and the birth of their daughter, I might add a chapter to this, although I have several other ideas I want (obsessively need) to work on first. :-)

michael709michael709about 8 years ago
Very unique!

I really liked this story and can see alot of ways to continue!

As a possible suggestion, since the two friends touched them, I think it would be interesting to have them show up and both be turned as well!

Just an idea! :)

SciFurzSciFurzabout 8 years agoAuthor
@ michael709

Thank you. :-)

I did think of having their friends turning as well, but thought by only touching it would be too easy. I'd have to have at least a second factor in why the siblings turned in the first place. Otherwise the world would be overrun by furry people by now. :-p

LovebeliverLovebeliverabout 8 years ago
Amazing

You're an amazing writer.. I'm amazed by the fact you didn't get dirty in the story and yet wrote such a great story.. I'm in love with your ability to express love in such great words

LovebeliverLovebeliverabout 8 years ago

Text me if u can.. I'd like to have a conversation with u

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Amazing.

You should work a few more chapters, this has to be one of the best books I have read.

SciFurzSciFurzalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@ anonymous

Thank you. :-)

There are a few thoughts about a rewrite and/or sequel in the back of my mind and I do hope to get a chance to turn those into the right words.

Jey_TMNGJey_TMNGalmost 8 years ago
sequel needed

Great story in general

no dirty sex scenes

love the romance

but the only clifhanger is no one actually knows why they turned...you could create a sequel where they found the root of thier lycantropy and maybe infect will and clarice too

SciFurzSciFurzalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@ Jey_TMNG

Thank you. :-)

I have been pondering during writing about why they turned, and also about why it seems random, but I haven't yet come up with a satisfying reason. If possible I'd like to avoid stereotypical reasons, but I'll probably have to settle for a variation of an existing one.

When I do find something that's good enough, it gives me a better chance of creating a sequel.

And who knows, it might just affect one or both of their close friends.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hot, sweet and sexy.

An amazing all around story. I really love it hopefully you can do some more.

SciFurzSciFurzalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@ anonymous

Thank you! I'd actually like to do more with this, or like this, so we'll just have to see what the future brings. ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Yes!

I agree with everyone that this needs a sequel! It was so adorable!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A 5-STARS Story

A really well written story with an excellent story plot and excellent character development. A seguel would be great showing their lives' together with their new daughter. It would be fun to see Clarice and Will becoming infected and change also. That way the 4 of them would be supportive of each other. I feel that Clarice and Will are open-minded enough that they would accept the change without any problems. As to how they became infected is really open to question as they only touched the fur and did not appear to come in contact with the salvia which carries the virus. I gave you 5-STARS for this excellent werewolf story. I want to thank you for being in the 10-15% of writers who actually finish their stories as the other 85-90% DO NOT finish their stories. Your ending is a good one but yet you could write a sequel without any problems. But the sequel should also include Clarice and Will weither they transform or not as Romy and Luis will need their friendship and support in their new lives. Maybe seeing Romy so happy with her new life and baby that Clarice will want a baby of her own and a life with Will. Retired Army NCO

SciFurzSciFurzalmost 7 years agoAuthor
@ anonymous and retired army NCO

Thanks! :-)

I don't have a specific idea for a sequel, but I will write more about them when the right idea pops up.

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Thanks! :-)

I think I'd not let both Will and Clarice change in a sequel but just one of them, to create that little bit of extra hurdle to get over. Both would be too easy, but it'll depend on what twisty plot I can come up with.

Is the percentage of unfinished stories really that high? I can image some having trouble finishing one, as I come across hurdles often enough, but if I'm just one of the few to finish what I start, I feel a little like being in an elite group. :-)

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceabout 6 years ago
Huh... interesting questions created here...

It would be nice to know why she's a dog and he's a wolf...

Would be nice to know why after years of giving an impression of feelings above and beyond acceptable to the normal person their parents are more bothered by the incest than by the lycanthropy...

Their catching it isn't totally out of bounds if it doesn't need to go *directly* into the blood stream... but then if simple contact will spread it, who or what else might have caught it by virtue of moving it...?

Their friends are pretty good friends too all things considered...

SciFurzSciFurzabout 6 years agoAuthor
@ Ambivalence

Dog and wolf? Good question, I'd like to find out myself. ;-)

That, and how they got infected and others not are things I left out on purpose because that wasn't the goal of the story. I'll revisit this though because there have been requests for a sequel and I added it on my to-write list on Patreon.

As for the parents more bothered by incest than their kids shedding fur all over the house, humans are weird beings and tend to focus on the wrong thing during stress.

Their friends already saw what was happing between the two siblings and thought their love was deep enough, which is why they weren't really bothered by the incest thing themselves.

baileytommybaileytommyover 4 years ago
Wolfen

I couldn't help but like the story'I hope you write more of it

LucalightdragonLucalightdragonalmost 4 years ago
Awesome story

Honestly I wanted to cry it was beautiful romantic sexy and just all around a great story great job I wish it was all way bigger story even like them finding out why they're transforming maybe them transforming more often or permanently or haven't control over it like I could see this being a major novel even with enough work at it but I'm a nerd like that that thinks in those aspects hell I can even picture a trials and tribulation section of the story some ups and downs of conflict yeah that would be a good story

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Very Romantique und Sweet!

11/10 Spiked Dog Collars!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Crying emoji, so sweet

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