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Awesome...
please continue.
Awesome indeed - been looking for the next chapter every morning and you didn't let us down.
creative imagination
at play.
; )
I just can't
I cannot say how many stars (probably 5) or what to say about the story.
I am just as perplexed as the heroes of the story.
I have read a lot of SF in my time but this is too complex for this old man.
By the way I have finally managed to register and now have a user name
dani_lrlm (it is meaningless except the "dani" which is my name)
D.S.
Just getting started...
Sorry, but this is one of those stories that seems to be writing itself. I think you'll enjoy the ending...
Im enjoying it but am I ment to be a bit mudled, if I am you've sucseded.
Great Story
With a challenging and complex plot line. Take your time figuring things out, the wait is worth it.
take your time
this story has a lot to say
OK, great story, break's over.
Great story, really enjoying it. You need to finish it, PLEASE?????
Waiting ...
While I appreciate being able to read stories like this for free, I hate authors that take a coon's age to post between chapters, if they finish the story at all ...
More chapters???
Love the Timeshadow series ... are any more chapters coming?
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