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A Simple Love Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/27/04

Simply Moving

I read all three Chapters to this story, and I have to admit it was moving. This is the first story that has moved me, made me feel sad for Leona and then joy for her. You are a very gifted writer, and I will be reading the rest of your stories, but I think I will remember this one for a long time.

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by sandd_bound11/02/05

lusting for more

is it possible for you to make another chapter? i just love this story. it is both heartbreaking and breathtaking.
thank you-scotchbound.

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by Anonymous02/28/06

completely a work of art

i say its a master piece , simply just touches the soul
i think it would bring tears to those who fall in love

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by Anonymous11/07/08

great work

well i really enjoyed your story its got everything its very touching story.If at all a disabled person reads this story there will be a ray of hope that there will be someone like "dave" who will take care & will give them lots of love.Hope you keep writing more sweet stories .

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by lormahoykyd200711/08/09

Moved to...

I loved this story to be moved from happiness to sadness and back in such a short story was great. You are a gifted and talented writer and I hope to see more from you.

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by tootiepeach11/19/09

i loved it

You are such a talented writer. Thank you.

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by Nicolecookie11/25/12

Woww

That serieswas nice I wanted to punch Dave for what he did but good ending

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by Anonymous12/23/13

this last bit was far too rushed

it felt like you just wanted to be done and finished with it and so it had no real development or build up or anything about Ken and Mandy....spoilt what was otherwise a good story.....

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by Anonymous12/22/15

Drivel

Nuf said

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by naxos6510/07/16

ROMANCE ?

The love ? He says she's special but HE LOVES fucking other women ! This isn't a love story , it's just erotica --------

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by Sampkyang10/18/16

Romance???

this is just a sick fuck story. i see no love here...

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