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My Little Bitch

byFisherXXX©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/20/04

r u serious

go back to the writing table

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by Anonymous02/21/04

I hope you r serious!

yes, go back to the writing table and add some more chapters to this story... you can have him do what ever he wants to her and I hope you do!

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by Anonymous02/21/04

well??

i would like to know what some of those things are also. please share...........

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by Anonymous06/29/04

you got something good going here. keep up the goo

good,very good...

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by Anonymous12/01/04

Hmm...

The girl let him fuck her, dont quite see how "her body is mine", hard to convice the reader that a woman so dominating became his in a matter of 2 paragraghs. Think you need to work on that plothole, or else learn the differance between a woman consenting to sex and a woman becoming your slave. Story didn't add up, and I personally found the premise boring, but not bad writing.

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by Anonymous06/30/05

very hot

oh yeah.....nothing like having a sexy bitch to ram your cock into when you want.....

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by Anonymous08/30/05

It was good

Two things need to be done with this story
1. It needs to be longer
2. It need s a sequal

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by Anonymous02/14/12

Yum, made me so wet.

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by Anonymous07/22/17

Another

Should definitely continue the story.

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