All Comments on 'Neighborly Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

It amazes me how in these fucked up stories how they try convincing the husband it's so fantastic and he's a great guy with lines like" your so lucky to be married to your wife"... Tell me, if he was in such a awesome position, ask these men who are fucking his wife if they would share theirs if they are married or when they do marry they would be so hospitable...pathetic...especially the humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Can't Wait

I can't wait for part 3. I hope, with the mention of birth control pills in part 2, that they have a more significant role to play in part 3.

There is married love, and there is sexual love. They often overlap, but don't necessarily have to. The character development and the descriptions of the sex in this story are excellent!

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopabout 8 years ago
Love black cock

Love the storyline, love the characters, love the sex. Xoxoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Just start the divorce now....

Might as well kick her to the curb... hubby has no say in any of it and the bbc knows he has a white married slut until he passes her on... The Husband is a wimpy worm....

they are done... story has no love.from the wife anymore. Future chapters will try to justify how this is great for hubby until she has a black baby.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I agree, can't wait

Now that she is a confirmed black cock slut, she'll need to entertain at least one of Richard's black friends. Looking forward to Chapter 3 & 4.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot!

The first chapter went on, this was too short! No pleasing me! Seriously though, great erotic writing. 5 stars! Look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Chapter 3 please!

Very well written and erotic. Please write more soon!

PenPal2001PenPal2001about 8 years ago
Great writing!

You are a very talented writer. I love the subtle and believable characters and flow of the story. It is somewhat similar to my story "Good Neighbor Sam" except that your pace is perhaps more erotic, I must admit. I look forward to more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Awesome

I hope hubby finds out Ashley and Richard have been doing it behind his back. He finds out and can't muster the strength to stop it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Don't change your style

Even better than the first installment, with regard to writing. Characters are believable. Love the way you are in John's head. Dialogue very well executed. Keep up the good work!

chief573chief573about 8 years ago
OMG this is great

Please more. Please extend Richard's control over Ashley. And yes, the threat of pregnancy would be great too.

cardinalfancardinalfanabout 8 years ago
Good Story

I liked this story and I'm hoping we can see a continuation of the characters. For my money, I like the story Business and Pleasure better and would love to see you continue that one. But good story either way and I look forward to more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very good!

One of the best stories i've read on here. Hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please continue!

I can imagine my wife craving black cock as I read about Ashley, and it gives me an incredible thrill!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please Continue

Please continue this story. I bet Ashley and John have more to say to each other the next day, no reason to be coy now. Ashley unilaterally made the bold moves so some communication is going to be necessary, especially with Richard gradually becoming more bold...and more demanding.

fr45fr45about 8 years ago
5*

Great story by a great author...more please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Yes have Ashlet begging Richard to her his pregnant black cock slut

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hoping for More Chapters

Wonder if Richard has any BBC buds that could be serviced by the newly hatched Black Cock Slut. When is hubby going to be further degraded and have to clean up the BBC before and after?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

At some point Ashley will give birth to Richard's baby.

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2about 8 years ago
And you know this ...how dear annony?

what are you a mid wife? 5 for a great story

voyeurcuckvoyeurcuckabout 8 years ago
Best cuckold story yet!

Can't make that up, bout as real as it gets.

bdholmesbdholmesabout 8 years ago
Hottttt Story!

Read thru all of your stories "everyonesavoyeur"...all of them are pretty darned HOTTT!! Hope you will continue to write additional stories! And, I too am looking for additional chapters to the Neighborly series!

Spartans1217Spartans1217almost 8 years ago
Great Story

Love the build up of ch-1 and in ch-2 Ashley is now a Black Cock Slut.

Waiting for ch-3...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
one thing

I would love a M/m action here: John needs to complete his submission and worship Richard's cock...

OOAAOOAAalmost 8 years ago
AMAZING STORY

Congratulations!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Another fantasy written by an n-wyrd trapped in prison

Feel a need to spice up your marriage? This isn't spice, it's toxic sludge. Erotica is brain titillation, not an idea road map to a happy and fulfilling long-lasting relationship in real life.

These writers almost always manage to slip in the big lie that interracial slutting is the most popular fantasy of white guys. Really? Give me a break. Losing their wives to n-wyrds is only popular among white guys who lack self-esteem or hate their wives. It's why most black prisoner writer-wannabes usually don't even try to avoid the inevitable devolution from loving wife to manipulative insulting bitch with a white wimp theme. It didn't take long for the manipulative whore wife and the bull and wimp theme to emerge. N-wyrds instructing white wimps to lead them to their naked sluts must be real common in the cell block. That this writer tries to give his stories phony "happy" endings just makes them even less believable. By the time this husband's wife was flirting and sitting on the neighbor's dick, this marriage was doomed. The little heart-to-heart chat in the apartment laid it on a bit thick. "Logic" is not saying "Watching the woman you love commit an act of primal lust is unfortunately not something most men get to witness." Unfortunately? HAH

The black donkey/white slut theme, as with every other bizarre fetish and kink, is now an erotic taboo even hyped by liberal Hollywood propagandists spewing the mantra of racial diversity. Some percentage of the population privately fantasize about it and the hundreds of other kinks/fetishes, but only a far smaller number actually experiment and with good reason. People, especially when drunk, do dumb things. Hell, some women fantasize about being raped, too. Far cry from something that has a happy ending in real life. The slut claimed she did some quickie research via her smartphone and "I just knew we couldn't be the only ones who had experienced something like that... and sure enough. It's everywhere." Seriously? "Everywhere?" Videos on the net - even so-called "amateur" vids - are now a dime a dozen, but still mostly staged by heavily tatted ex-cons and heavily tatted heroin-anorexic prostitutes or fat women with low self-esteem willing to debase themselves for a shot at sex and "fame" - if you call a pr0n fame. Even if thousands of real married people have done this as the 70's free love gen morphed into the let's spread AIDs with the diversity pandering political correctness gen (it's possible the count may have even reached 5- or 6-digits by now as sick raunch pervades society) it would represent a statistically insignificant fraction of the married/exclusive relationship population. There are no stats on how much experimenting with perversity - aka "exploring" or "adding some spice" - contributes to failed marriages, either by exposing flaws or destroying trust. However, such stories are great for prisoners trying to convince a gullible segment of the public it's popular and "enlightened." What do they have to lose? A whopping 250 readers of pr0n favorited this story so eager participants must be "everywhere!" LOL

Despite these misleading short stories in the laughably oxymoronic "Loving Wives" category, the vast majority of wives who really do LOVE their husbands don't screw around, the vast majority of husbands don't encourage sharing nor would they assist or meekly stand nearby jerking off like pathetic wimps while their wives screwed someone else. Talk about a "be careful what you wish for" slippery slope that will blow up a relationship.

1954hall1954hallalmost 8 years ago
I love this story

Great story. I love how she admits how naughty she loves being and the most is her being a blackcock slut. She loves the way it gets in her head and once he's done with her another Blackman will take his place. Her husband knows she's hooked and accepts it because he loves seeing her submit. Perfect. Love to watch that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love it.

My wife maggie became a black cock slut at age 32.she wishes she had started earlier. Maggie loves older men and she found this story very hot. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Longer please

I was excited to see Part 2 released, but a little disappointed that it was not as long as part 1. Also it didn't bring quite the heat as the first part. Still worthwhile read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pathetic

At this point he needs to just kill himself. She no longer needs him. He isn't even a man. He's so dumb he doesn't even know that they are humiliating him. She obviously planned it and has been cheating on him for weeks and the Cunt and her real man decided to stop hiding it. She had no feelings for her pathetic husband when he stuck his dick in her loose used pussy and all he did was masturbate for 2 seconds while she yawned waiting for him to finish so she could continue to make love to her real man. You can't get more pathetic than that. The guy is a coward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just Another Really Stupid Cuckold!!!

No wonder we had the financial district implode everywhere. If this dick of a husband is anything to go by. He literally must have shit for brains and a definite mommy complex. But not all the blame is his...his wife is a whore and I give the marriage not too much longer and it will be in the toilet. I agree that she is fucking her neighbour behind her husband's back. What a fucked up couple. If married couples get off on this type of sex than it is no wonder that lawyers are getting rich. But as P.T. Barnum said...there is a sucker born every minute...

satinlvr_mwfsatinlvr_mwfover 7 years ago
Just awesome

I'm glad to have favorited you... You have some great talent!

ChuckEPooChuckEPooover 7 years ago
Continue please

This was another great episode. It would love it to continue with some natural feelings of regret, jealousy, and envy. She becomes the wife of two husbands in the biblical sense. What about exploring pregnancy? This is a marvelous series that most readers want to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Another cuckold

Hey, let me celebrate with a mind-blowing orgasm while my beautiful wife decides I'll never be satisfying to her again.

Oh yeah, damn, that's exciting.

But at least you find out that your wife was never loyal to you, not that watching your wife screw someone else shows your loyalty to her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
One of the best

Simply put, one of the best I have read here in a long time. . . Well thought out. . and put togather in a way that tortures until the very end!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Incredible! One of the hottest stories I've ever read - I hope there is another chapter soon...

Sheryl22Sheryl22over 7 years ago
OMG

This story is sooo hot. This is very well written and sooo dam erotic. Each time I read it I have to take breaks in the story, I get so hot.

Please Ashley needs more chapters, please!

QuantockQuantockover 7 years ago
Finished

In more ways than one!

Now completed all the stories published by this author to date. Every one arousing, predictive text suggested 'arising'. I have openly shared these with the wife and watched her intently reading his submissions. Another word we can play with.

Much better written and constructed than many found on here and just the right length.

Encore, encore. Added to the favourite author list.

Following these fantasy situations dare we try and do this in reality?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I don't get it

For fuck sake, you've got a dick and she's still got two perfectly good holes available....why the fuck would a guy jack off? My late wife and I went through an open marriage phase (with occasional woman brought in as well as times with another guy) and...even with the guy who was 10 inches, either me and the other guy banged her at the same time or he would have his go and then I would go afterwards (I love fucking a sloppy pussy, when we were alone I would always fuck her a second time after the first just because a swollen cummy pussy feels so good around my dick), there was none of this jacking off garbage, the way we saw it, every tadpole that gets released from either of our cocks needed to go inside of her mouth, pussy, or asshole. Oh and nobody DARED to pull the "you need my giant cock to be happy" routine or the pussy gets cut off immediately and an ass beating was in order for not respecting our marriage and for violating the trust we showed in involving the other person. I'll never understand this cuckold humilation shit that so many of these stories feature. Oh well, at least it's not like half the stories here where the wife ends up having the neighbor's children or leaving her husband for a cock or ending up a deranged gangbang slut who no longer gives a shit what her husband thinks or feels. I guess that's something.

TandALoverTandALoverover 7 years ago
Need more.

Continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved It

A Very good beginning to the start of a wonderful cuckold marriage.

The story moved at a good pace starting with chapter 1. And not to fast which allowed time for character and story development.

There's more story here than the author has given us so far, hopefully a sequel is in the works.

Hope to see a sequel in which John becomes comfortable with Ashley fucking Richard regularly.

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal1969over 7 years ago
More please

Really hot fun.

michael1950michael1950over 7 years ago
Topics Abound

I see so many plot lines available for this series, exploring each personality. The husband and; the popular camera action and video's, full cuckold sissy mode, cream-pie action, fluffing the bull, to list a few. Love how you kept the aggression subtle so far. I digress, the sense of edging in you tale, reminded me how much I enjoy the pillow talk where role play enters in creating permissive access to more liberal sexual activity. The banter of a couple that inflames and explores forbidden topics. Loved it, thanks.

Kitist02Kitist02over 7 years ago
Enjoyed it,

but I couldn't have lived with it. One or two of us would have died, maybe all three. My tiny ego, like my tiny dick, would be subsumed.

Kitist02Kitist02over 7 years ago
"Enjoyed it", continued

I should also say that it was very well written, leading the readers along the narrative path like we were on rails. Everyonesavoyeur is obviously a master of the erotic written word.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Guess your only salvation

will be a stroke that leaves you without emotion.

knickerlover13knickerlover13over 7 years ago
hot

great story.made my wifes pussy very wet. more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love her evolution

After getting her to admit she is a black cock slut, it seems appropriate that Richard start taking her down the road of sharing her. Please continue

TigersmanTigersmanabout 7 years ago
Where's the fire truck

This story is so hot it could burn down a house. I liked the fact Ashley realizes what she has become and what she needs. It would be hot for Ashley to tell Richard when he about to come to 'Breed Me'.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
MORREEEEE

PLEASE UPDATE SOON THIS IS WITHOUT A DOUBT RAMPING UP TO BE ONE OF THE BEST INTERRACIAL CUCKOLD STORIES ON THIS SITE!!!

goat17obispogoat17obispoabout 7 years ago
The husband is toast

The husband should realize, possibly after the first session with the neighbor, Richard, and certainly after the second session, that he and his marriage are toast. The wife, Ashley, will never be willing or able to continue to have sex with her husband when the pleasure and satisfaction from sex with him are minuscule compared to the pleasure and satisfaction from sex with Richard. Very soon the wife and Richard will want time to themselves without the husband, and probably for her to sleep with Richard in his apartment instead of sleeping with her husband. Also, Richard, being male, will soon want exclusive access to the wife, as males do: humans, lions and so on. The husband should probably fold his tent and file for divorcee, so that he can seek a new partner in life that he is able to satisfy and who will stay with him.

The sex scene is well written and overwhelmingly seductive - whew! What a great movie or video scene it would make, preferably with professional production, lighting and camera work.

A graphic representation, perhaps CGI, perhaps by drawings or models, of a cross section through Richard and the wife showing stages from initial entry through deepest penetration and ejaculation, would be nice to see. By golly, brings to mind the educational plastic models of the visible man and the visible woman, suggests a cross-sectional model of a 12" dick penetrating an average woman. I want one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The best

I have read hundreds if not thousands of Interracial cuckold stories. This one is by far the best. Where others go off the rails with gangbangs and pregnancy and all of that just so that the author could touch upon all of the erotic possibilities of a cuckold relationship, this one stays a steady and realistic course. And in doing so, creates such a genuine scenario of real people. Ashley hasn't disengaged from her husband. And Richard hasn't pushed for pregnancy or making her his personal whore nor does he go to any of those stages so many stories do. And why? I think because the author is trying to capture the reality of this experience. What drives a man to selflessly allow his wife to explore pleasures he cannot give her? The answer is unconditional, confident and complete love. It doesn't take a weak soul to admit you have limitations. It takes strength and conviction. When a man can sit back and truly gain joy and pleasure from his wife's pleasure, that is unique. And I think that is something that this story conveys without the need to hit the reader over the head with it. If you are a man and read this from a place of uncertainty or selfishness it will not resonate and may flat out make you angry. But notice, Ashley has not cast her husband aside. Nor has Richard. In the heights of ecstasy they have all played with the power of words and suggestions. And for those that experience that in their own sex lives know. That is power tonic. Admitting she is a black cock slut does not in any way translate to being a literal slut that will fuck any guy. Any shape. As long as he is black and has a decent size cock. so many stories go there and that is just not realistic. This is a respectful wife. She has an engaging relationship, friendship and attraction to a man other than her husband. She still loves her husband. He confidently wants her to be happy and realizes the pleasure she is getting. As a result he is pleased too. That is beautiful and loving.

Everyonesavoyeur please keep the chapters coming. There is so much room for the three of them to explore their relationship and the amazing connection they all have without going the route of so many others. Just the nature of her marriage and her relationship with Richard continuing would be amazing to follow. I hope you will give us more chapters in this amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The story is well written and very erotic however

The one thing I never understand about these stories is the idea that you (the husband) are doing your wife a big favor (a gift from a really strong man) by letting her sleep with someone else. We're also to believe the husband will enjoy watching it as much, if not more, than his wife. What husband doesn't want to hear another man call his wife a slut? And sorry to disagree with the previous commenter but there is plenty of humiliation in this relationship and also not a lot of love.

So here's the test: turn the situation around have the husband find a lover that is much better than his wife, and let's have the wife accept the fact that she just can't compare. Maybe we can even have the wife masturbating while watching her husband having sex with his lover. How about, while he's fucking the other woman, he let's his wife know how much better the other woman is? Finally let's have the wife encourage her husband to knock up his lover. I bet the feminists would really love that story.

CumSlurpingCuckoldCumSlurpingCuckoldabout 7 years ago
Black Breeding.

As a Beta White male, I know about the superiority of African Phallus and want to share that with the woman I love.

OOAAOOAAabout 7 years ago
AMAZING!!!!

Fantastic story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love it

Love how Ashley is depraved with Richard, but is all un-moaning with John.

More, need a third chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Another beautiful tale of a white couple and an older black bull.

I love how Richard is so subtle with his beliefs of superiority and the idea that black is masculine while white is feminine. Eventually John will associate his own whiteness with femininity and submit to the more masculine black cock.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Disappointingly predictable

As chapter 2 evolved, it became apparent that Ashley was lusting after Richard's cock and couldn't wait for a second round.

The fact she was prepared to fuck him the second time without any discussion with John, indicates the storyline has gone down the road of a true cuckold. It no longer is a "team" decision by husband and wife. And of course Richard becomes more dominant as do most of the black man/white woman stories here.

Chapter 3 needs to be the end of Ashley and John's marriage, and perhaps him committing suicide and Ashley ending up in an asylum full of guilt. Heck, maybe after John kills himself, Ashley will hang herself after shooting Richard. All 3 dead. Enough said.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Richard has a v large black penis.

John's is not as big.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please Add Another Chapter

I too, would ask please add another chapter to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Need More

Please add another chapter to this amazing story. It does not need to go off the rails into pregnancy but this story line has plenty of room to mature and excite your readers. I do hope to read more and to share with my wife who I recently turned on to your stories. This was her favorite series so far. Something about the neighbor and the comfort of being at home that she especially enjoyed.

Hope to read more from you soon.

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42almost 7 years ago
Talk about conflicted feelings.......

Very well designed, planned, and wordsmithed story. Well done and entertaining so I gave it a 5. BUT..........I HATED THE PREMISE. Sorry

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5* +++

Magically descriptive & disturbedly addictive, as is the case w/ all your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep it coming

I don't understand why haters keep reading and commenting. Obviously, they are really turned on by this idea, but are not man enough to admit it. There is nothing hotter than seeing my sweet little white wife enjoying a big bull. She moans in ways I have never made her moan. You capture the eroticism of wife sharing like few authors have done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank you for such and erotic story

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this story. I myself would be honored to allow my wife this pleasure

KaraSweetKaraSweetabout 5 years ago
Bravo

Very sexy great addition to the first story. I love that you didn't humiliate the husband. I only wish you would have put the husband seeing another man's cum dripping out of her pussy making it finalized that she was completely taken. Gave them both a 5. Im sure the last one will be just as hot. Hoping she had a rendezvous with him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Green curtains

It is always nice to read a well written story about well hung Black man fucking a white wife and cuckoldin the husband.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Haha no

“They say it's the biggest sexual fantasy for married couples”

Only in the dreams of repressed homosexuals. Hahaha.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A Beautiful Time

Loved the story and I wish it was my Gf getting this BVC .

maddictmaddictover 4 years ago

What was you thinking.

You opened the door, who did you think was coming in. I like the story because I am just reading and not living with this new and expanding dynamic.

Well done.

Now get you cock in her mouth while Richard is fucking her. Two reasons, so she won't be able to tell you how good it feels, and you could unload down her throat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Black Cock/Black Pussy

I married a black woman(a white guy) with luscious tits and a nice firm ass who came to me one day saying a guy at the gym spoke to her about how he like to slip his hard on into whatever hole she wished. She told this to me as we were getting ready for bed and she handed me her panties that were soaked through. She invited him over to couple and me to watch. She started off doggy style and brought me to a ragging hard on. We replay that event often.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
please change the story line

you are awriter parexcellence. need i say more? on request. can you please change the story line? married couple, wimpy sex, sex crAVed wife, blackstud neighbour, fantasy fulfilledof interracial sex and a cick hubby. fantastic. but bring in some varietyandhelp us to many more faps. dont get offended and stop. keep writing thesewonderful stories. cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
John, wake the fuck up!

Given the conversation going between Ashley & Richard, this is Not their second time. It’s the second time, that you witness their adultery. They have been getting busy during the day, while John is at work. Ashley needs to tell John, and find a female for John.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Świetna historia

białego małżeństwa w związku couckold - konieczna jest kilkukrotna czarna hodowla pięknej Aschley przez starego,siwego murzyna jego gęstym,treściwym ,lepkim nasieniem gdzie jej mąż może jedynie lizać i czyścić jej pipkę z murzyńskiej spermy i przygotowywać swoją żonę pod kolejną czarną hodowlę

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great imagination

Really like your stories. Can't believe some of these comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
John remove your head out of your butt

My wife thought it would be ok to have a half open marriage being just her half. When I figured it out I wouldn't touch her till she got checked she said it was a stupid idea. I said he was a f. in factory worker and I have heard about that factory. If she wanted to keep our family together go. She was clear but who do you think got a damn disease you are right I was ready to see a lawyer but let her talk me out of a divorce. Later in a heated talk I asked if she had told him about the disease she said she hadn't I left it alone laughing under my breath thinking maby his wife would get it and start questioning him. He lost my friendship I avoided him when ever possible. Just to have a little fun with my wife I flirted with his daughters and granddaughter at parties it would piss her off. Although I would never do anything. Other times I would flirt with a friend's wife she would say grow up and behave she is married I would just replied why should I care you and your lover didn't. She what will it take to get me to stop and said go have sex with someone and make it even.I asked how many times should I have sex 7 or 7x77. She never has answered. I think she knows I will never break my wedding vows. Life go's on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I guess I am different

I talked with many of my friends and yet to find one willing to be a cuckold. May I ask who are those type of writers?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another dumb chuckold

My wife Julieanne finally convinced me to let her try a black man. We had several rules. #1 One time only regardless of the outcome.#2 If she wanted to guit at anytime she could. #3 No oral.#4 No anal.#5 I could stop it at anytime. #6 She would not be forced in any manor.#7 I would not be degraded in any manor.#8 I would be first. #9 No kissing.#10 This is sex only the word love was not to be said.#11 I would have the same option to have another female. I had typed these rules so we could give to the other participant. To say the lest we were both nervous the night we went out dancing and really having fun after a while she and I was asked by 2 different white guy's and we agreed to 1 dance each. They were both very respectful and appreciative when they brought her back to our booth. A little later a large black man asked Julieanne to dance while I was in the restroom I was told later. So to say I was a little perturbed when I returned to the booth and she was not there would be an understatement and was dancing on the far side of the dance floor but it had taken me a little while to spot her. So I just walked over to them as I aproched I seen he had one hand on her behind the other on her tit I cut in. I could tell he was pissed but I am sure Julieanne could tell I was totally pissed when she looked at me I just said do you need to look at the rules and did you have A______e reed them? She said I am so sorry I guess I just got to excited and for got it won't happen again. I said I know it won't happen again and I am sorry to and that I was ready to go home turned walked to our booth sat to finish my drink Julieanne sat next to me asking to forgive her and if she had messed up bad enough that she wouldn't be aloud to try a black lover? I said Julieanne did you just hear what you said? No what? Damnit think let's just go. She said OMG I said black lover didn't I we do need to go. As we were leaving the black guy aproched us asking why we were leaving come on man I know your wife craves a black lover to satisfy her needs that you can't. I said F_____f puss you arrogant self centered A______e! That do it for him and he took a swing at me I blocked most of it causing him to hit Julieanne knocking her back. I spun around kicking him up side the head putting him down and out. By then 2 bouncers were there asking me to take my wife and leave. I said I would be glad to if that dumb__s was the kind of people they catered to. The black bouncer said easy now unless I wanted trouble. I just said bring it on big guy if you would like some to. Just about then Julieanne yelled watch it Steve behind you I spun again and kicked another guy in ribs knocking the wind out of him spinning again and kicked the black bouncer in his ribs. When I stopped the white bouncer had started to pull out a tazzer I said don't be stupid he dropped his hand away. I glanced at Julieanne saying keep watching my back she said she was and that she had sent John Don and Larry text to come help. It wasn't 2 minutes till Don and John showed up. After we were outside Larry pulled in John said J____ _____t what is going on Steve? I just said ole just some arrogant guy that couldn't keep his mouth shut about Julieanne. He looked at Julieanne and seen the mark on her face asking what happened to you sis? She said it was my fault for moving to fast blocking the other guy's shot causing her to get hit and laughed. John said Steve that's why I always called you lighting. We thanked them and went home. When we were in bed Julieanne was hugging me saying how sorry she was and said forget about her wanting to try a black guy. I said not all black guy's are arrogant stupid and disrespectful as that a__ tonight was. She never brought it up again and that has been 18 years ago.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very hot!

Clearly the ever popular "magic big dick" strikes again. I'm in the top 5% of size according to the charts, but I can't seem to find one of these size queens. Sure, I get an appreciative comment now and again. But no bueno to the automatic explosive orgasms. I get it, it's erotic fiction, but as a big guy, can't help but be disappointed that these big dick stories don't translate to real world women. That said, love the story. Only request would be to explore the jealousy and angst a little more. Your husbands are a little too encouraging for my tastes.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 3 years ago
NOT SURE ???

This is a hot erotic fun story...wish I had a Richard for my wife... but he lives too close and he just starts to show up wanting to fuck her... He is now going to start showing up when hubby is at work...its easy to see this is soon going to blow up into far far more than hubby ever wanted...if he has any brains he will stop it ASAP to save his marriage

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Some parents raise the dumbest boy's

But I am not one. My wife talked me into it so I said one time and if either didn't like it just say and it would stop and that would be it unless we agreed to try again later. While we are at it is it ok if he is black? I said it's ok as long as we stick to the rules. So she chose a big black guy and we agreed to meet him at a restaurant and he was to act like a salesman so if we ran into someone we knew they wouldn't know what we were actually doing. Thing's went fine so we agreed on Saturday evening our 3 children stayed with my parent's. He seemed like a ok kind of guy till we went to the spare room our room was off limits. After I started the show he said he thought guest went first I said not in a case like this the Dominant goes first and last. He said mon you got dis backerds the big black bull says what's goes down and when and who. Sorry bull that's not my rule so if you have a problem you can leave. My wife said easy honey he's just used to being in control. Yes but this is our house our rules. Ok I said let's try again I said have a seat there Johnny boy and watch. Johnny you will have your turn if you follow the rules. My wife and I started playing with each other after my wife was getting worked up and she had me hard I glanced at Johnny he had a funny look. I said don't look so disappointed I promise you will have a good time in a little bit. We didn't have sex the night before just played around and that day I played with myself but wouldn't give myself relief plus I took vitamin's that I knew would help me have a large load. After 20 minutes I pulled out and blew. Actually the first hit her chin then tits belly and crouch I had done a beautiful job of marking my territory. I kissed her and whispered love you are you sure you want to be an adultress I love you! She gave me a look. I knew this might have an effect because her dad had cheated on her mother she had caught him herself. Her mother and father divorced. I rolled over on with a sigh. Johnny stood up. She sat up in bed saying Johnny I am sorry but I am going to ask you to leave I just can't do this and take that chance on what it might cause it's a long story but I just can't I am sorry. Unbelievable Johnny said that he really understood and hoped he can find what you guys have in the future for himself. O by the way you better treat that man you got very well. I can tell he's a good man and he has very impressive equipment it larger than what I have. Thanks for the show I really enjoyed it. Later. I seen him out and thanked him for respecting her dicision. He said you are welcome and left. I locked up went back to bed. She rolled to me and layed her head on my chest and said Thank's for bringing that up. I said I am glad it worked because I couldn't see me allowing another man do you. Said I am so sorry I will never ask for anything like that again.

chloelovesfurchloelovesfurover 3 years ago
chloe tv

As i said last story in this trilogy. 1 I played with my self. 2 only skipped a few bits. 3 felt like i was that cuck, and like was there in my head. 5 star no brainier for me. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
gross

1*

congrats

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
One sided

When my wife Anetta had sex with someone else I knew she didn't respect me and I sure lost my respect for her and it showed. Later on I did something to piss her off after I was pretty sure of her having an affair with a man named Rob I thought was a friend. We were arguing and when she said I didn't respect her. I asked should i? It just made her madder. So what the H___ is that supposed to mean she asked. Well first you lost your respect for me.. What the H___ are you talking about? Well you tell me. Damnit Steve tell me what you are talking about. Well here we go then didn't you F___ Rob. What would make you think that? My time to get pissed Damnit don't to deni it Anetta you lied to me and our family I mean you cheated on me and our family. Where do we go from here do you want a divorce Anetta? No I wish I never did it. How many times? I don't know. What do you mean you don't know 7 times or 7 times 77 times. Seriously I don't know but just a few. Was he better bigger no and no. Then why was it more than once because it could end out marriage? You know I try not to associate with anyone that I know that cheated on their spouse right? Yes. Well are you filing for divorce? No I made a mistake I don't want a divorce and I hope you don't want a divorce either. Well I will not file if you promise it will never happen again. S___ you promised that before at our wedding and how many times we went to the Valentine's party and we redid our wedding vows with all the other couples there. We just had our 45 anniversary.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Neighborly

I had to work over several hours and when I got home I wad beat. I was very quiet entering our apartment so not to awaken Julie my wife. Actually I could walk through our apartment blindfolded. I washed up and undressed in the kitchen. Then naked went to bed. In the pitch darkness I could tell Julie was way over on my side and I nugged her saying move over please. She moved over a little just enough so I could get in bed. I asked could I have a little more room? She moaned I can't move anymore. Ok I will just go to the living room then. I got up at the bedroom door it hit me. I turned on the light and thought what the Hell is our black neighbor Earl doing in our bed? I went to the kitchen got my phone took pictures. Then got some boxes and packed all my clothes put them in my truck. Went back in and got what was left of my personal items and wrote her a dear Julie letter. Apologizing for not being there for her. Apologizing for not being good enough for her. Apologizing for her hating me so much. Apologizing for not careing enough for her enough. Apologizing for anything I did to causing for her to make her feeling so unprotected. Apologizing for her not want to start a family with me anymore. The list went on for 2 pages. The last lines were I don't love you anymore and you can have everything. Apologizing I wasn't black enough for her. Signed you worthless soon to be ex. I walked out the door. I did have to see her in court. He family and mine and friends tried to talk me into giving her another chance. A year later I seen her with a guy I didn't know. I walked up to her and nodded she said hi how are you doing? I said great the last 2 months that was when the divorce was final. Then she introduced me to the guy that was with het. I said good to meet you and best of luck to you. You are not near as black as her last lover. Maby that old saying is not correct about once you go black you won't go back I laughed and I turned and left.

knotthd44knotthd44about 3 years ago

Great story! When does the husband eat Ash’s cream pie?

StoneyLodgeStoneyLodgealmost 3 years ago

Very hot story -- great imagery -- makes one wish it were illustrated with pics!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That for sure the marriage would never be the same I would be gone!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I would record it and watch it with her parents and siblings then divorce her

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot story. Ashley needs to stop fucking John. Just let John eat her out after Richard cums in her thoroughly used and satisfied pussy.

GiganticGiganticover 2 years ago

Now we are getting to the nitty gritty, the Good Stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just as utterly amazing as chapter 1!!!!!!!!!

amosp7374amosp7374over 2 years ago

I really struggle to understand why people read these stories if it offends their sensibilities and activates their insecurities and inherent lack of respect for women. Obviously the core of the story of love of their partners pleasure is lost on them. Wonder what the respect levels for women’s sexuality and needs are for these individuals. They were all consenting adults in the story and the love, trust and selflessness of the male partner are key components.

It was well written and erotic.

smilingjimsmilingjimover 2 years ago

Damn! Great story!!!

mikenightmikenightover 2 years ago

All these years and this story makes me cum

Enfield13Enfield13about 2 years ago

Any bloke with an average size cock that allows/wants his woman to fuck somebody with a huge dick is a fucking idiot . I hated that these two cunts took the opportunity to molest each other when he left the room for a moment, so much for all their bullshit honesty. Fucking typical

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Another 10 stars. BRAVO, and can't wait to read chapter 3. JEF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

She needs bbc,thats ok with me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I would dare admit as dude to call my wife a black cock shut and expect to get by with it. Such a dumbass writer.

IcemanhdIcemanhdalmost 2 years ago

Auch der zweite Teil ist der Hammer ! Genau nach meinem Geschmack ! Ich hoffe es geht weiter !? Danke !

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