All Comments on 'Katrina was Different'

The visuals were excellent as was the exposition of the narrator's thought processes. I enjoyed it overall but found it a bit frustrating also. The timing between thoughts and action seemed a bit off-balance. Just when I was getting into the sexual action and wanted more, the narrator had already moved on to another thought. That it bothered me that much points out what a compelling author you are. But I couldn't quite favorite this one just for that reason. 4/5 certainly isn't bad and I'll certainly read your next piece. Thanks for sharing it.

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FANTASTIC !! I'd love to be there.......