I am sitting here sipping on my wine reading this delicious story...I loved how Nathan's birthday night slowing build into a sexual frenzy only to be topped off with a slow gentle I love you...so incredibly sweet! Keep doing what you do (write good stories) and I will continue to support you!
by
Anonymous02/12/16
This story is absolutely amazing. It hits all the right notes and I love the characters. Thanks so much for writing this.
I'm enjoying every story you write. I know life happens, but thank you for your submissions here. Selfishly I may ask for longer ones, but as long as the wait is not yearly, I'm a happy camper.
Your love scenes put mine to shame! Wow! Hotter than Lucifer's bartender and a lot more fun!
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Anonymous02/14/16
Loved this story!!!
Nathan was hot as all get out and so damn perfect and Maxie was sweet, hilarious and sexy! Anything you write, I will read! Thank you for a great read.
Jeanie Johnson
You never cease to amaze me with Nathan and Maxie! You bring them to a full boil & then back down. Through the gift and words from them both, you have made them as one. Only time will tell how deep it is & I can`t wait to read it!
I still want to push those Glasses up her nose!
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Anonymous02/15/16
Intense
Hello, I'm kind of new to literotica. I've read some mediocre texts, some rather good, some I just wasn't into but your story is one of the best I read. I just love the relationship. It starts of a bit like an exciting fantasy, mystery man and mystery woman but the way they talk to each other and laugh and tease each other feels so genuine that you fall in love with the story. The sex scenes are incredibly tender, with buildup, heat, and are always very exciting but also emotionally intense. I love this couple and this story :) thank you for writing
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Anonymous02/16/16
You ain't no good
I was mostly content with being single for this Valentine's day and then I read this. Sigh. You're hurting me. Oh and your writing is amazing.
When I can't sleep I read. This was...better than one of my daydreams or dreams period.
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Anonymous02/17/16
Title Change
Seems this story is better suited being titled "red" or "dressed in red" lol. But seriously I love how you are wringing this and I can't help but smell some impending drama on the horizon. Keep up the excellent work!
So, listen, I'm currently working on Part 6. It's a lot different than what, I'm sure, you guys are expecting. If I can drop any hints at all, just know that what happens next is going to be a pretty big deal regarding the arc of dear Maxie and Nathan's relationship.
Thank you for your patience. And super big thanks for your support and love. You have no idea how much I appreciate it.
Wonderful
I love this story. Please continue to write.
Hot damn!
Yes they love each other!!!!! Can this be a movie? Thanks for the shoutout....I'm just giving credit where credit due!
Holy crap!!!
I absolutely LOVE this story!!! The dialogue, the emotion! Whew! More, I need more! Shonda
*****
Five.
DAMN
All I can say is just DAMN!!!!! Keep it coming sweetie!!
OMG!!
I'm so jealous of Maxie right now. To have a man feel the way Nathan feels for her is everything! This story is too good. Please Update soon!!
5
5 is not enough
In Love
I love these two, can't wait for more.
Long time coming...
Part Five I'm In Love.
Wow!
I am sitting here sipping on my wine reading this delicious story...I loved how Nathan's birthday night slowing build into a sexual frenzy only to be topped off with a slow gentle I love you...so incredibly sweet! Keep doing what you do (write good stories) and I will continue to support you!
This story is absolutely amazing. It hits all the right notes and I love the characters. Thanks so much for writing this.
*Blushing*
I'm enjoying every story you write. I know life happens, but thank you for your submissions here. Selfishly I may ask for longer ones, but as long as the wait is not yearly, I'm a happy camper.
Still blushing...
What an uncanny ability you have luv!!!
I WANT A NATHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Where have you been
One of the best stories I've read in a long time on this site. Can't wait for an update. Keep up the great work.
Sweet Lord!!
That was some good stuff!!
omg sooooo SEXY HOT OMG!!!!!!!!!! 5*
LUV how she loses control with him!! I do the same with my hub *swoon* ;3
Please, ma'am? May we have some more?
I really hope this tale isn't done yet! We're enjoying it way too much!
5 HUGE Stars!
And might I add...
Your love scenes put mine to shame! Wow! Hotter than Lucifer's bartender and a lot more fun!
Loved this story!!!
Nathan was hot as all get out and so damn perfect and Maxie was sweet, hilarious and sexy! Anything you write, I will read! Thank you for a great read.
Jeanie Johnson
The Heat is on!
You never cease to amaze me with Nathan and Maxie! You bring them to a full boil & then back down. Through the gift and words from them both, you have made them as one. Only time will tell how deep it is & I can`t wait to read it!
I still want to push those Glasses up her nose!
Intense
Hello, I'm kind of new to literotica. I've read some mediocre texts, some rather good, some I just wasn't into but your story is one of the best I read. I just love the relationship. It starts of a bit like an exciting fantasy, mystery man and mystery woman but the way they talk to each other and laugh and tease each other feels so genuine that you fall in love with the story. The sex scenes are incredibly tender, with buildup, heat, and are always very exciting but also emotionally intense. I love this couple and this story :) thank you for writing
You ain't no good
I was mostly content with being single for this Valentine's day and then I read this. Sigh. You're hurting me. Oh and your writing is amazing.
For the 5th time I read this...
When I can't sleep I read. This was...better than one of my daydreams or dreams period.
Title Change
Seems this story is better suited being titled "red" or "dressed in red" lol. But seriously I love how you are wringing this and I can't help but smell some impending drama on the horizon. Keep up the excellent work!
Part 6
Hello Loves!
So, listen, I'm currently working on Part 6. It's a lot different than what, I'm sure, you guys are expecting. If I can drop any hints at all, just know that what happens next is going to be a pretty big deal regarding the arc of dear Maxie and Nathan's relationship.
Thank you for your patience. And super big thanks for your support and love. You have no idea how much I appreciate it.
Love always,
~EJ~
The mystery starts
EJ, Now you really have me craving your next chapter...
P.
Nerv-cited (nervous/excited at once)
Your recent comment has got me wondering about this next chapter. Is it a good or bad surprise? Lol. Either way i'm excited for the next chapter. :)
New reader
I really liked how u can keep the readers asking for more! Love love how this story is writing out! Waiting (im)patiently to part 6!! 🙌👍🙂
Omg..
The next chapter needs to be submitted! Like yesterday! So in love with your story! 😍😍😍
Part 06
Hello loves!
Part 06 has been submitted is is pending approval. So, keep an eye out!
Just wanted to drop in and let you know!
Hope you enjoy!
Love always,
~EJ~
Looking forward to it!
I'll let B_D_P know, when she gets home. We're both looking forward to it. :)
I'm legit crying
Perfection is all I can muster to say....
My babies
I love them so much!
Damn
That was perfect.
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