by MYVELOCITY
This is a great story! I love the combination of vulnerability, tenderness, and really hot sex. It's a shame some folks are willing to let their homophobia get in the way of a good story.
I really enjoy your writing, this beautiful story deserves more than 5 starts
This wasn't what I expected, I'm not even gay, but there's something genuine in the vulnerability, the tenderness, the respect, the hurt, and the passion of the characters that come together to make a beautiful story. Forgive the run-on-iness of that sentence. Keep writing.