I admit on page one I had my trigger finger ready to deliver a bomb. Typical cuck shit and Laura needed a smack. But as her and Kevin began screwing I noticed Phil didn't seem quite so upset, by the end he was walking around watching from different angles and my finger eased back.
When he all but tosses Kevin out of the room then fucks his silly, going from meek to aggressive I felt like I'd made that turn with him and thought the way he took her was damn hot.
The story ending with them laughing and loving and showing this is what made them both happy, did make me pull the trigger. On a five. I liked what you did here. But word of warning, the first page is going to make a lot of people pull their trigger too early. Shame, because its a rare story of a fun couple here.
You know I love your work LC, that's why I follow you tp whatever category you write in. This was a good effort and I agree with the other poster, at the start I was thinking, 'here he goes with some serious man abusing' but it really played out well and turned out Laura was a hot wife, but with full permission from Phil who went from a limp noodle to a damn stud after he watched Kevin fuck his wife. I liked the ending, especially the little 'fry sharing' kiss, very sweet, a familiar fun thing between a loving couple. I liked it, but like anon said, this is a knee jerk crowd, most won't get to the end.
These two deserved each other...They complete each other...I don't know if they love each other, but they know that only together they can have the life they like...Not even after the fuck party, they said "I love you"!!! So they have the best of the deals and don't ruin other people's lives...I don't think they even have children...so 3*
I enjoyed this story with a loving couple who know how to have fun. Young guys are great as they get hard quickly and recover soon. Hope that more stories are posted soon.
Is This Wicked Game still to be fully played out ?
Each half of couple played their part to practiced perfection. I was wondering though about the foundation of their relationship. This has potential to go very bad because they are walking a very fine line. But the writing ( inspired partially by Albee ' s ' Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf ' ? ) by lovecraft68 went beyond the rote clichés and was worthy reading even if substantial questions linger after heated fray.
I thank the author for sharing even as I wonder if real cuckolding and pseudo-castigation of Phil are addictive in nature in order for him to achieve his a-game. Is the erotic drama their mutual spice to marital coupling or can he go beyond fear of loss in order to fully man up. I thank the author for sharing.
I greatly enjoyed that and filed it under my hefty "Wish I Had Thought of That" category. Very well executed. Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous02/12/16
Who wants a whore for a wife?
What's he going to say when she gets knocked up by another man or more likely, brings home some nasty disease? Seems like an unnecessary risk. Nothing original about this willing cuckold garbage. Hubby being okay with her actions just makes it worse. Simply no fun to read.
1 star.
Although we all knew how this story was going to end, I for one found it really hit home many times, as if the writer has been peeking in my windows. More chapters?
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Anonymous02/14/16
Wow
That is an amazing story. My wife of 15 years and I have been wanting to introduce other people into our sex life. Weather it be a man ...so I can watch her be the freak that she really want to be. Another couple would even be cool with us . Same room swap kinda thing. Stories like yours really make us want to explore the life style. Thank you for the great story. That has really inspired us to actively explore .
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Anonymous02/14/16
Editing
Really needs it. Punctuation is horrible, making this a difficult read.
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Anonymous02/19/16
It started out with the look and feel of yet another bad cuckold story.....
....and about the time room service showed up, morphed into a really kinky mutually satisfying fuckfest.
Now, don't get me wrong, I don't care much for this kind of story....but I read it to the end anyway. You tell a good story. These characters seem different people than they turn out to be....well, wifey is pretty consistent, but hubby flips like a bad coin. This is their brand of love, good, bad or indifferent, they are both bought all the way in.
But...there are abusive and, some say, unhealthy elements in their relationship and sex play.
Well, many relationships have those elements....and they carry on until one gets tired of it, or bored of it or hurt, and it ends....sometimes quietly, sometimes noisily.
Again, not my cuppa, but well presented in any case.
Now...about your spelling and punctuation....you create these little children, foster them, and present them to the world...but they are poorly dressed, somewhat shabby-looking, in need of a bath and fresh, clean clothes. And yet, you let them go, still dirty from the playground, shabby and unkempt into the world for all to see.
Why not put a little (or a lot, in some cases) more effort into their care and keeping and send them along in their best light? Otherwise, it makes relating to them more difficult, sometimes unpleasant.....and who knows? It might reflect badly on your efforts as a parent to do less.....
Thank you. Looking forward to your next venture....and hoping you go for variety and commit to the risk.
Awesome story loved it! Yes, may need some editing but the content is the importance of this story not the grammar, punctuation. Great job! Loved the cum slut loving wife!!!!
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Anonymous03/21/16
Nice Story
That story really turned me on. Looking forward to enjoying your other stories.
Absolutely amazing, I for one really didn't see that ending completely the way it did, But I truly loved it. You are an extremely talented writer!!! This story is not really worthy of 5 stars , but they won't allow me to give you the 10 stars it truely deserves. Thank you so much for sharing
English
Nice turnaround
I admit on page one I had my trigger finger ready to deliver a bomb. Typical cuck shit and Laura needed a smack. But as her and Kevin began screwing I noticed Phil didn't seem quite so upset, by the end he was walking around watching from different angles and my finger eased back.
When he all but tosses Kevin out of the room then fucks his silly, going from meek to aggressive I felt like I'd made that turn with him and thought the way he took her was damn hot.
The story ending with them laughing and loving and showing this is what made them both happy, did make me pull the trigger. On a five. I liked what you did here. But word of warning, the first page is going to make a lot of people pull their trigger too early. Shame, because its a rare story of a fun couple here.
Good effort, but wasted
You know I love your work LC, that's why I follow you tp whatever category you write in. This was a good effort and I agree with the other poster, at the start I was thinking, 'here he goes with some serious man abusing' but it really played out well and turned out Laura was a hot wife, but with full permission from Phil who went from a limp noodle to a damn stud after he watched Kevin fuck his wife. I liked the ending, especially the little 'fry sharing' kiss, very sweet, a familiar fun thing between a loving couple. I liked it, but like anon said, this is a knee jerk crowd, most won't get to the end.
5 STARZ
Pretty good read.
These two deserved each other...
These two deserved each other...They complete each other...I don't know if they love each other, but they know that only together they can have the life they like...Not even after the fuck party, they said "I love you"!!! So they have the best of the deals and don't ruin other people's lives...I don't think they even have children...so 3*
Very Nice
I enjoyed this story with a loving couple who know how to have fun. Young guys are great as they get hard quickly and recover soon. Hope that more stories are posted soon.
Is This Wicked Game still to be fully played out ?
Each half of couple played their part to practiced perfection. I was wondering though about the foundation of their relationship. This has potential to go very bad because they are walking a very fine line. But the writing ( inspired partially by Albee ' s ' Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf ' ? ) by lovecraft68 went beyond the rote clichés and was worthy reading even if substantial questions linger after heated fray.
I thank the author for sharing even as I wonder if real cuckolding and pseudo-castigation of Phil are addictive in nature in order for him to achieve his a-game. Is the erotic drama their mutual spice to marital coupling or can he go beyond fear of loss in order to fully man up. I thank the author for sharing.
Five stars
I greatly enjoyed that and filed it under my hefty "Wish I Had Thought of That" category. Very well executed. Thanks for sharing.
Who wants a whore for a wife?
What's he going to say when she gets knocked up by another man or more likely, brings home some nasty disease? Seems like an unnecessary risk. Nothing original about this willing cuckold garbage. Hubby being okay with her actions just makes it worse. Simply no fun to read.
1 star.
Good job!
That was a hot story. I do agree with your final comments, that neither of them were as bad as we thought they were.
good story
Although we all knew how this story was going to end, I for one found it really hit home many times, as if the writer has been peeking in my windows. More chapters?
Wow
That is an amazing story. My wife of 15 years and I have been wanting to introduce other people into our sex life. Weather it be a man ...so I can watch her be the freak that she really want to be. Another couple would even be cool with us . Same room swap kinda thing. Stories like yours really make us want to explore the life style. Thank you for the great story. That has really inspired us to actively explore .
Editing
Really needs it. Punctuation is horrible, making this a difficult read.
It started out with the look and feel of yet another bad cuckold story.....
....and about the time room service showed up, morphed into a really kinky mutually satisfying fuckfest.
Now, don't get me wrong, I don't care much for this kind of story....but I read it to the end anyway. You tell a good story. These characters seem different people than they turn out to be....well, wifey is pretty consistent, but hubby flips like a bad coin. This is their brand of love, good, bad or indifferent, they are both bought all the way in.
But...there are abusive and, some say, unhealthy elements in their relationship and sex play.
Well, many relationships have those elements....and they carry on until one gets tired of it, or bored of it or hurt, and it ends....sometimes quietly, sometimes noisily.
Again, not my cuppa, but well presented in any case.
Now...about your spelling and punctuation....you create these little children, foster them, and present them to the world...but they are poorly dressed, somewhat shabby-looking, in need of a bath and fresh, clean clothes. And yet, you let them go, still dirty from the playground, shabby and unkempt into the world for all to see.
Why not put a little (or a lot, in some cases) more effort into their care and keeping and send them along in their best light? Otherwise, it makes relating to them more difficult, sometimes unpleasant.....and who knows? It might reflect badly on your efforts as a parent to do less.....
Thank you. Looking forward to your next venture....and hoping you go for variety and commit to the risk.
ut
Awesome story loved it! Yes, may need some editing but the content is the importance of this story not the grammar, punctuation. Great job! Loved the cum slut loving wife!!!!
Nice Story
That story really turned me on. Looking forward to enjoying your other stories.
Ezcellent
Absolutely amazing, I for one really didn't see that ending completely the way it did, But I truly loved it. You are an extremely talented writer!!! This story is not really worthy of 5 stars , but they won't allow me to give you the 10 stars it truely deserves. Thank you so much for sharing
Fuck 'em !!!
Fuck spunky2 this story was easily worth a 4 on the Budweiser Scale keep 'em coming (pun intended) !!!*
* for info on the Budweiser Scale email me at
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just a cheap nasty fuck shank whore
and he is a wimp ass cuckold to let her do it.....needs to kick her ass in to the gutter where she belongs...
1*
cuck shit.
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