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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nicely done!

I really liked this story! It had just enough detail to get me invested in Helen's situation, without so much that it was delaying any gratification. Most of the erotic scenes in stories from this genre usually either read too quickly, or much too slowly, but you struck the perfect balance here! And the pirate talk actually helped to bring life to the characters for me, so I enjoyed it. Bravo!

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I have a friend named Helen. I wrote her a story once, and she really enjoyed it, and really enjoys sharing them with you. As you'll see she gets into all sorts of trouble. I hope you enjoy them. :)