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Great finish
Your idea of Melody being able to do fantasies opens up some cool avenues for stories. With the Defender I can tell you play or have played SWTOR, nice touch. Also nice finish back in the "real world". Considering Melody's powers I'm surprised you didn't write in a scene with Princess Leia in her prime LOL. Enjoying the series so far.
One of the best I've read so far
Unrestrained sexual activities are rarely satisfying, which is why I think your story works so well. It may be a challenge however to keep the characters developing sexually. Even so, I'm looking forward to your future chapters!
Thanks FormerReader
Although I can't really take credit for the "idea" of fantasies; that ability was well founded back in JoeBrolly's and Gorilla's genie stories. Definitely had a lot of fun with it, though. Glad to know that it's clear how huge a Star Wars nut I really am; I definitely let that shine through in this one. The next chapter should be up soon!
I wish
you would stick to a theme.
switching from one sub genre to another mid stream muddles the original concept.
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