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To Become a Hunter Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/14/16

Good.

That was real shady of Patrice, but still a good story.

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by Anonymous02/14/16

Good story!

Needs to be longer. And a harem. And The MC better be a badass not a pussy. Nothin worse then a pussy MC.

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by tiger_prodigy02/17/16

Hay!

Good story so far, keep it up :)

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