All Comments on 'Dan and the Bottle Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please finish this story soon.

Sorry disableddan but the time between posting your chapters is so long I always forget what's happening. I like your story but could you please finish it soon, at the rate your currently posting chapters I don't expect the story to be finished before at least 2020.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Thanks for this new chapter

Thanks for this new chapter.

I would like some more of it

Harald

disableddandisableddanabout 8 years agoAuthor
Sorry, folks....

For the long delay on this one. I was without a computer for a while there, plus several hospital stays. A bit of writer's block didn't help matters much either. Bear with me; I'm doing the best I can. I've got a few more chapters in the works, currently, but they're mostly ideas rattling around inside my head at the moment.

beezlebubbeezlebubabout 8 years ago
Chill

Hey folks...these writers put out some great stuff.

They are doing us a service. This stuff is costing you guys nothing. Quit whining and enjoy these stories when they come

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Good to see you back, a really great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Medieval law - need more stories

I love the medieval aspects of the story, can really see it happening and see the prospect of this growing.

keep up the good work, this is a great story.

disableddandisableddanabout 8 years agoAuthor
Hey, folks....

I'm currently about a page in to chapter 24, in which (spoiler alert) I'll be adding more new people and more sections of the country. Don't want to give too much away at this point, but this one is going to take a bit of time..... oh, and thanks, Beezle.... nice to see there are some people out there who get it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
mental health!!

Greetings Buddy, hope u get well soon man, missing your writing badly, a couple of my friends and yours truly love your novel and have a great confab after every new chapter, please keep it up!!! Frank and the preppers(south African style)

disableddandisableddanalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Chapter 24

Has been submitted and should be approved soon. Sorry, folks, had to work on some other projects for awhile, Working my way through a bit of writer's block. Amazing what a few days in the garage will do for clearing the mind.

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