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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve02/16/04

up under :)

yes, there is genius up under your scraps.

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by sandspike02/16/04

Cool...

I'll be honest, I don't really understand it all, but
it reads well to me. I have a lot to learn and this poem
is a good lesson.

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by annaswirls02/16/04

whoa

cuts right to the nerve, and then ends with a

"in celebration of monster building ending
lets dance"

you are 2cool, 2Rivers

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by annaswirls02/16/04

whoa

cuts right to the nerve, and then ends with a

"in celebration of monster building ending
lets dance"

you are 2cool, 2Rivers

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by jthserra02/17/04

And again...

(I read beauty first) this time with a big stick. A powerful inditement, excellent poem.

jim :)

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