All Comments on 'beauty'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
I want to...

make a comment on this poem because "Tracing paper" has already been commented on. This poem is equally grabbing - both in subject and presentation, some lovely imagery. Well done!

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Your phrasing

always intrigues me. Something about it, the kind of sideways lines that work so well.

jim :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
~

up take falling to

new

sights down is the up side

held from toes

"I died for beauty but was scarce"

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Nicely done ~ pulling the reader in with all your descriptions, then your creating a sound for the reader to imagine as though this were an audio poem.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Beautiful

This rendering has an almost mystical quality to the way it's worded.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE BEHOLDER OF

tokens of life. VALUES SOAR. TK U MLJ LV NV

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