The Link

Magic once again...

I couldn't stop reading.
Thank you!!!

Can't Wait for Chapter 2

You write terrific stories, and I keep looking for more, more, more!

Drivel?

First I would like to say is your drivel is very impressive. I love this story and looking forward to part 2 . Thank you and keep up the great work.

It's Certainly NOT Drivel

Just read this story end to end for the third time. By all means keep writing; your stories are wonderful.

THANK YOU and More.....

anxiously waiting for "The Link" part 2 . please share it with us ASAP .
And thank you again .

Great Tale

I have enjoyed everything of yours that I have read and am anxiously waiting for chapter 2.

I cannot think of a better word than AWESOME!

Different story...well written...thoughtful...sure kept my attention. Looking forward to more....please!!!

Like

Like your stories, have graded them highly. Just hoping you might get small things right, such as the difference between to and too.

Well done.

As usual, well done. I'm glad that you are continuing this story. It may have been long with very little sex, but was well worth it. You're a very good writer.

Nice

Great story, I'm addicted to your writing... just keep an eye out for minor details like the confusion of Rose's name sometimes being Ruth? Unless that's my error. Other than than, awesome job, didn't stop reading till the end. Looking forward to see how the story continues. I like the way you're mind works man. Don't stop.

Amazing

even though the the sex was very less detailed and small in number....the intriguing plot kind of made of for it. short grammatical errors here and there but thats okay.....i loved it. if you do continue it.....keep it going in the same direction and humanize teegan more...especially the effect her parents had on her.

good work. keep it up.

Outstanding!

Your stories are addictive. This is one of the finest stories I have ever read on this site. Thank you!

I had to come back for a refresher

before venturing on to Pt. 02

It was even better this time.
thanks

Given half a chance, I would give it a 10

I must have read the story now at least 5 times and I was never disappointed. Really, everything is good in this (rather long) story. Character development, the pace the story moves forward... Truly, this is one of the best on Literotica!

Excellent!

I started this story and then stopped. I came back to it later and had to finish it...I liked the scenes involving Teegan and her nuclear poop diapers..😁😁😁😁

Terrific story!

What an incredibly good and engaging story! So looking forward to future chapters.

Story telling at it's best!

You are a very skilled individual to be able to catch and hold my attention over both books, good character development and the story progressed nicely, a little suspense here and there plus a little loving to balance it all out.
Great work and i look forward to the next installment.

Kudos!

Probably your best work to date!

Simply brilliant story

Giving this story a 5 star rating doesn't do it justice, it deserves at least twice as many.

A superbly written story with engaging characters - I cannot wait to start part 2

the only thing i truly dislike about this story is the reason you gave why sam mom was as she was that are enough people who were truly loved by there parents who turned evil and there are enough people who were mistreated by there parents who are good

it all comes down to strengt of charater there are 3 things that make a person who he is parents invirement and himself so i realy dont like that you blame her upbringing

for the rest of the story a 5 truly origenal and a very nice read thank you

***** A great story...

... only slightly marred by some editorial lapses.
For example you often write "...and I" when it should be "...and me".
e.g. "Lunch was brought up to Teegan and I."
Surely you would never say "Lunch was brought up to I." ... at least I hope not?

Exceptional Story with Captivating Premise.

His most imaginative work from one of the the several best writers on the site. Totally absorbing. The author in bio says he has been criticized for writing "drivel" stories? Reminds one of something about pearls and swine. If this be drivel keep it coming. Every one of his stories is a gem.

Great story

I agree to the comments of the others readers. This is a great story.
Respect to the sex scenes, I think they aren't so explicit, for me, are erotic inside a lovely relationship, and normally, love and sex come together (if the love are true).
5* for you.
Now, I go to read the second chapter.
Great Job!

Amazing, captivating story. Thank you!

I'm so happy I stumbled over this story. I loved the premise from the start and the character design and development hardly left anything to wish for for me. I practically devoured the story that contained so many lessons and truths in my eyes.
It has probably been recommended before and perhaps it is redundant to suggest, but finding an editor and publishing this story in book form must be something to consider. I'll eagerly start on pt. 2 very soon, so I don't know how far it goes yet, but it could easily become a multiple part series, I think. I know I would buy it and I don't usually buy books haha!

- R

COULD NOT STOP READING!

Amazing storyline, I loved it and can't wait to read the next installment.

Writing driv...?

Dream Cloud, I read history, classics, SF, fantasy, biography, etc. While I am not a hard sell for quality writing I am no pushover, either.
I enjoy your writing very much. Please keep it coming.

P.S. (You changed Abigail to April for a bit when we first met her.)

The story consumed my day

Not that I had anything better to do... Finding quality writing on this site is, at times, daunting and stars don't necessarily tell the whole story.

This story, on the other hand is thoughtfully constructed with real characters and real feelings.

Now, on to Part 2 - I fully expect my evening to be consumed by it.

Thanks for the great read.

Worthy of screenplay to a movie.

I can't get enough of your writing.
OMG... Don't call your mom! No! Just knew that was a mistake.
Wish this was available on a Kindle.

Details are a bit off...

You'd be hard pressed to find old growth forest within 30 minutes of Bismark, ND or a sequoia growing alongside the road in the AZ desert. Otherwise a good story.

Holy crap, Dreamcloud!

That was effing EPIC!

You need to get this beauty on Netflix, or HBO.
It NEEDS to be a series. 120 minutes would not be nearly enough time to properly convey the awesomeness of your story!

Lost for words...

...well not really.
A truly outstanding story. Your scenes are so easily visualised due to how very well you describe them, it was as if was there... or someone was projecting them to me.
I'm gonna be so bored when i finish reading your stories as I have yet to find a talent to match yours on here. This maybe just a hobby to you but these works of art deserve publishing. I would buy them even though they're free here. Thanks, 6 stars!