Yearly Check-up

Too bad there isn't more visiting and commenting like there used to be. This is erotic poetry as its best on Lit. I love the way you took what is a sterile examination room and turned it into something entirely different. The contrast made the erotic elements even more prominent. I'm not sure about "almost cynical." However, I sorta like "It's almost clinical/no strings...." leaving out "pure lust" as well because if something's pure, it can't almost something else.

Great poem.

nice

I liked this very much. its many years since I visited this site. I used to contribute at one time. But I was drawn, almost by accident toward this piece, and very happy that I was. Its profoundly unpretentious. Simple but evocative. Truthful but imaginative. Humorous but very sexy. The notion of great passion in a sterile environment sets up a very productive tension which feeds the readers expectations. Theres also an underlying sense that this might be part of a real experience, a kind of biographical poem, and this makes it all the more intriguing. Thank you Guilty Pleasure. You really had my attention. Cx