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Love it
Story is actually improving as it progress' and shows great story depth.
Great Addition
However, I have one question.
Which Smash Game?
Super Smash Bros. Brawl
Since the main character is based on me, and I only have a Wii
thoroughly enjoying this series
thank you very much for sharing and keep up the good work.
Great Chapter
Not all chapters need to be heavy on the sex to be good,if you have likeable characters. And these two certainly are. As the others said, they are starting to be fully developed. I think its amusing you and I also have similar views on the Star Wars movies. I'm beginning to wonder what Melody would make of Episode 7 LOL. Anyways, keep them coming and FYI you are on my favorite authors list now.
STAR WARS IS NOT SPACE OPERA
ITS SCIENCE FICTION YES BUT ITS SPACE FANTASY AT BEST
that is all. Great story otherwise.
Sorry Anon, but you're wrong...
Star Wars has been described by George Lucas himself as a space opera. Go check out the Wikipedia page for Space Operas, and you'll find Star Wars listed as a notable example. Perhaps you meant that it's not an opera, in that it's not a story told by singing, which is true. However, space opera is a specific genre of film largely unrelated to musical stage operas.
You are violating your own rules
Melody told Mike she was prohibited from reading his mind. But she is now doing it to Darcy?
With all her powers available to them, of all the things they could be doing together, they watch Star Wars and play video games?
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