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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/16/16

I definitely see good potential.

I would just use more vivid and raunchy descriptions. Like how did his dick/ the sex smell? How many inches was his dick? Was the girl a virgin? Was there blood? Did she ever masturbate in private before the intercourse?

The story is good... Maybe advice for the next story you write! :)

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by Lo_Pan02/16/16

Tattoos

Tattoos just timurn my stumoch. Especially tribal tattoos. Ugh.

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by Dream5902/16/16

Excellent

This is an excellent story. It provided detail even though it was short. I gave it 5*s.

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by grabmyballs02/17/16

Force Isn't Sexy

Although apparently your people found it okay, the force/rape aspect made me sad.

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