All Comments on 'Study Break Ch. 03'

I liked the story even though the characters are not my cup of tea. I have a particular aversion to tattoo's on women, something about spoiling such lovely skin, so liking Vicky as a character is difficult. However, the two seem to be a good match and life goes on. There certainly is opportunity for a continuation of the story line and I suspect Vicky's parents are not too pleased with her choices in life thus far, so that could be interesting as well.

that was supposed to be the end? it was more like a chapter outline of what you want not a chapter to further the story to an end.

It was way too short and abrupt. Now keep this story going to make up for the short chapter. I still gave it a 5, but only because of the previous chapters.

I like this and there is a lot of potential for development - good job