Artiface of Strength Ch. 14

Thank you!

I love it your story and hope that will be a sequel .

Love the story! But it's so unfinished :(

I love this story! You've left so much unfinished though. I hope you write the next chapters in these characters lives soon.
DJ

Great story, thank you!

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story, it has been very entertaining and I have loved your characters.

Ending was a bit fast considering how long all your other chapters have been, but that is your prerogative as the author.

I would love to read a sequel to this story, again thanks for sharing.

Lovely

Thanks Sis.

Missing Chapter

Loved you writing and always gave 5 stars but really feels like there was a chapter missing between 13 & 14. Jumped from war footing to epilogue without any actual resolution of the main events. One example was the messages from Beth & John - were they actual messages? When did they pass them on? When did they get found? What was said / decided?

It just felt a bit rushed.

Other then that one issue really well written characters and I like the way it was put together.

William's kids are intelligent and they have been taught well. If they have any gifts, they will be more powerful.

Kudos

I agree with the comments previously, The jump at the end left me wanting for resolution but by far this was the best nonhuman story I've read here.

More please

The problem with trying to encourage writers with 5 stars is that when something really well written comes along 5 stars don't do it justice. 'Nuf said. Where's your 1st novel available to read?

totally loved this story, very well written and a change from the normal genre. Outstanding, wish i could give it 10 stars. Just curious if there is going to be another chapter to this.

Thank you

This was such a pleasure to read. A unique take in a bloated genre where you dotted the i's and crossed the t's in a delightful manner. Can't wait for the next story from your talented brain.

Aaaaaah yes! That's the stuff right there!

Thank you so much for such an excellent story!

Please keep writing!

After a point this was the MOST

interesting and fun story I have read in a while...

I would love to see it developed further.... along the lines of the JazCullen, Jaisen and TaLtos6 stories. Lots of details, background, etc.... And side stories, a whole tapestry... on a Native Peoples' loom....

And I love the presentation of the Deity, both feminine and masculine, and her sense of humor, and her "side-kick", Ja-mul....

This has been fun

I also appreciate your editing, spelling, grammar and organizing... with just a touch here and there for cultural or historical accuracy!