First chapter was a little rough reading. I wish you would make the installments a tad longer.
Great build up, all the pieces are falling into place so nicely. Very enjoyable read.
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Interested to see where this goes.
First chapter was a little rough reading. I wish you would make the installments a tad longer.
The chase is on.
Great build up, all the pieces are falling into place so nicely. Very enjoyable read.
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