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All of the chapters, so far,
have been well thought out, written, and presented. Keep going.
Intense
You obviously know the musician part, it seems real to me, even if I have no idea what a professional orchestra musician is like. As for the later part, good that Darcy has now seen what a loser her bf is and can move on. A lot of other authors would probbably be setting things up for a threesome, however I don't think that fits the characters. But they're YOUR characters. Anyway, I'll read the whole series.
Still loving it
This story is very nicely written. I like the small touches that give the characters more personality -- things like their musical interests, background, what video games they play... All builds a very compelling and believable story. It's very easy to suspend disbelief about a sex genie when you've got such a richly designed sandbox.
Keep up the good work!
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