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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/23/04

alot sexy...even more suspense....love it...

the heading says it all!!! make the ending soon..... =0)

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by Anonymous02/24/04

Exciting

It got better and better as it progressed. I would think the next part will be very exciting and full of more intrigue.

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by Anonymous01/29/07

can't wait for part two!

but I must admit, the misspelling of 'thru' is distracting, especially since there are no other spelling or grammatical errors in the piece... Character development is strong, and the plot is moving along nicely.

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by YourLittleAngelle01/13/08

Intriguing

I liked the complexity of the characters. The sex scenes were quite nice as well. Good job and I'm hoping for a sequel.

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