All Comments on 'Serengeti'

A lovely work that must be read more than once to be appreciated in its complexity. >?)))><

this is wonderfully erotic and filled with so much admiration, it made me feel sooo good!! thank you, Liar

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A line from one of my favorites popped into my mind when I read this: Pale hands I loved beside the Shalimar.

You chose the loveliest words for this poem. A pleasure to read.