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wow
This is gonna be so emotional!
This story, I see will take us on an emotional journey. I may see grammatical errors, but I still followed the story. It is interesting to see where you lead us. Willing to follow this and see how it evolves.
Wow.
Supernatural aside, this was phenomenal.
I agree with Marta on what she told Darren. With his behavior he is causing problems with his mother.
I hope we get the backstory as to how Lila and Marcus hooked up. I want to know why they had they type of relationship they had.
Your Story
This is the first time I have read any of your stories and I must say your writing is wonderful. One of the other comments said emotional, and I must agree. But the thing is that all writers are trying to find the right words that make those emotions come to life for the reader. You are onto a great story, please continue this wonderful trip into their lives. Thank You
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