All Comments on 'Malcubus Ch. 09: Lust Never Sleeps'

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SometimesReaderSometimesReaderabout 8 years ago
Keep 'em coming

Absolutely love your work. This is my favourite series up here (possibly of all time)... enough to compel me to make an account and such. Whatever direction you decide to take it -- incest, mind control, rape -- you've got a loyal reader here. <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

This was awesome. Nice to see Rosie turn up the heat a bit. Can't wait for more!

NightPorterNightPorterabout 8 years ago
Great.

Loved it. The swing back and forth on the content spectrum is fine by me. You seem to have a good balance going and the rape scene was hot. She is a succubus after all it can't all be roses and sunshine.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great job

Great work I am really enjoying the story line and your doing a wonderful job giving the charectors charector and keeping the story going at a decent pace I hope you keep the story going I'm really interested to see where and how we get to the end

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Eric powers

You need to improve the powers Eric got there's been nothing since he summoned the demon and ur making it out to his ex that's she's evil and hurting him but atm he has no way to fight back he needs to become more dominate in their relationship

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Tempting me to the dark side

First I'd like to insult sicard (he doesn't get caps) for not catching the freakin' superman reference. He's a freakin' Gobal Icon! Doofus! I also enjoyed the cocky sob getting cock blocked. :-)

Anyway, I don't like rape. I don't like non-consent. I don't like mind control. With that said, holy crap this is hot stuff. So good that I find myself enjoying stuff I never thought I would.

Keep on writin' you magnificent bastard!

PS- I applaud this not going SUPER super dark when it totally could have been.

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