Knot What She Expected

Fantasy

I'm sure we'd all like to.

stupid

i hope there is more to the ending then this .. it ended stupid

Worst than a story about a cheating is one about bragging...

Worst than a story about a cheating is one about bragging...And this one have a cheating and a bragging ans worst have a bad plot...For me it doesn't need any part 2...1* is more than it deserves...

An easy lay, if ever I saw one. I wish that we could go back to traditional gender roles with the male taking the leading role and the lady being unwilling, but lust-ridden. Pity, as it started out pretty well

Ok

Needs another chapter with an ending.

Conclusion

I was quite surprised after not hearing from Lisa for the last three months, to find her standing at the door of my meager apartment.

"Lisa?"

"SURPRISE!" she squealed before walking past me, suitcase in hand. "Can you get the other two?" she asked.

Sure enough there were two mammoth bags still outside. "What are you doing here?' I finally managed.

"My husband kicked me out and divorced me. Damn pre-nup didn't leave me much. I'm still pissed he got me fired from teaching. At least he agreed to keep me on the insurance until the baby is born."

"Baby?"

She smiled, already opening her suitcase. "DOUBLE SURPRISE! Guess who's going to be a daddy? And I'll give you one hint, it's not my sterile ex."

Surprise was right. Looks like I'm the one who got tied up in the end.

Thanks for the feedback

@Addictedtoyou, We don't have pre-nups in Britain. Pissed means drunk. And having an affair will not get you fired from a teaching job. Try writing your own story before attempting to write a conclusion to someone else's. If the morality offends you, maybe you're on the wrong site. Just sayin'.

Pathetic & Sick,...

what's worse, though, it's got no beginning or end.

thought this flowed well

and was entertaining along the way. It does leave the reader wondering the nature of the husband/wife relationship, was he into it, how did he just stand there frozen, what happened afterwards? But it is not necessary, good little tale.

end the story!

Your comment that they don't have pre-nups in England is wrong. What is true is that they are seldom enforced by the courts in England!

More to the point, I enjoyed the story and found myself disliking the main character immensely. I would have to agree with the frustration with most of the comments. The story has no beginning and no end! You obviously are a talented writer but this is one story that seems to be unfinished. I get the impression I am not the only one who thinks this way.

This felt more like a "scene" than a story.

What is going on? Is this an open marriage?

Even if it is, why the fuck is she having unprotected sex with this asshole?

If it isn't an open marriage, how the fuck can it possibly survive?

She has zero respect and love for the husband. She wants to be tied up, get him to fucking do it. She takes a chance on contracting STD including AIDS.

She fucks him in their bed.

And why the fuck is the husband just watching?

This story was not a story, and the scene sucks because we don't know what is going on. Whether she is a cheating cunt or just a stupid one.

I DONT THINK BE PREPARED IS PART OF THIS TRAINING

but forearmed for the weak of heart, TK U MLJ LV NV