All Comments on 'Air Charter Ch. 01'

Chapter Two please!

This is a very well written story so far; a great mix of character development and erotica. Can't wait to see how you fit Amy into this tale. Keep up the great work!

Brilliant such a wonderful real story totally believable and leaving the reader wanting more. Please!!

Fantastic start to a possible series! Thanks

Very good story! Ground work laid for at least one or two chapters! Can't wait for Amy to visit!

Looking forward to the next chapter

An awesome setup for a multiple chapter effort very much worth reading.

BRAVO!!

Very sexy, good conversations and good characters. Looking forward to the next chapter!

5 stars!

Keep this going, it could go really far, I can see all kinds of possibilities for this story.

When are you going to finish this??????

More please.

Nice job on a most interesting story.

I see an improvement in your story writing from a couple of years ago.

Please continue this story!!!

Cheers.

I keep looking for ch.2 but noticed you've moved on; please return and continue.

Of course, I have not read one of your stories that was not excellent. I am looking forward to reading chapter 2. Please finish this series.

Thoroughly enjoyed this; I see you've gone to other projects. But please go back.

When do we get a second chapter?

Fabulous story!

PLEASE PLEASE continue this wonderful story it is fantastic

What Warlocks said! More! It's not veryften that we get stories with heart, sexiness and restraint...

Wow, what a really good story, did not see that ending coming. (pun intended) !!!

Really loved this story. Smoldering hot, realistic characters and great development. Can't wait for part 2! Only remark I have: please let somebody read your text to eliminate the obvious typos (due<>do), and check that Amy and Kim's names are not switched (certainly as Amy will probably join them in the next chapter).

I really enjoyed this. Looking forward to the next part but agree that you need to edit for typos and I think you've said Kim when you meant Amy right at the beginning.

i needs more of this

Love, this is the best

Please, don't stop!!!

Please continue. You have begun something that can be a long and very enjoyable story.

Continue...please?!?!

please continue

Good plot, good personalities and good hot sex.

Well worth a second chapter.

Just one small detail in all your stories. Let someone read them to get rid of the small logical and spelling errors.

Great story!! Please continue.

Are you working on chapter 2? Let's see where it goes.

Thanks,

I'm really hoping you continue this story line.

Waiting for chapter two!! Keep up the great work. Thanks for putting the work in to write. I'm a reader, never a writer!

Hopefully a chapter 2 with Amy coming out.

Need CH. 2, got to know who it ends

Well, the guy is certainly an ass and a bit full of himself, is he not?

That being said, I liked the story in spite of it, and, like many others here, would love to read more.

I liked this story a lot, it's a taming of the shrew kind of story which appeals to me.

Perhaps he tamed her a bit too easily, but as we've only got one chapter so far, that may be a good thing, otherwise we might not have gotten to the good stuff!

What you have hinted about with Amy sounds very promising and I agree with everyone, please let us have some more of this!

Adam has tamed the bitch and gotten into the real women. Now how will he handle her and Amy together? Thank You!

It think it's supposed to say Amy here, not Kim:

I'd asked Kim more than once for a date, and always gotten the same answer, "we can fuck or we can work together. Which do you prefer?"

What a story, I can't wait to read the second part here in a few minutes. I love how you set the scenes in your stories, it makes me feel like I'm there.

I love the story and can't wait to read part 2, but don't get in a hurry when you proof read or your mind reads what you wanted to write but used a similar sounding or spelled word. Example - on the last page you wrote mind when you probably meant mine and you wrote form not from. But I've definitely tagged you as a favorite author!

I'm amazed there are no comments posted for this story. This story is not only sexy, it's believable. Plenty of models and celebrities pair up with an ordinary guy or girl. Kind of reminds me of the movie Overboard! with Kurt Russel and Goldie Hawn. Well Done!

I got to the end of the story and saw NO comments. Harumph!!!

Hope to see more chapters!!!

Your one of the best writers on Literotica!!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

I hope that this Christmas and all to follow find you well and happy.

Paul

Was surprised with Kim's speedy turnround from super bitch which was a little unbelievable until the final couple of passages provided an explanation. Great story, very enjoyable read. 5⛤

Outstanding story so far!

Story line is fun, the skill of the writer makes it flow and easy to envision the scenery and personalities.

Good story...well done. One small thing...your main characters is a pilot but you got the phonetic alphabet wrong...it's "golf" not "gulf" for "G", which is repeated numerous times. As an active pilot, that jarred me every time.

Really good story.

Fun story. The characters took a while to develop, but the wait was worth it.

Really liking this, as his idea of a vacation jibes with mine, and curious how 3way with Amy works out...

Serendipity. Like a cloud burst that starts out with threatening rumbles, then sprinkles, or more downpours, or hail, but the warm sun bursts through brightly... Nice to let down the cosmetic defensive front and enjoy the rapport.