Inevitable Case

One of your BEST! Thanks!

Great

I like some story (and I appreciate when it's not the usual love story with an evil former boyfriend) with my porn so I really enjoyed this. It was well written, suspenseful, and definitely made me want to read more. Thanks!

Loving it!

I hope there is more.

Spellbinding

I never should have started it during my break at work!! I hope you continue this story!

Captivating Story

Hope it continues on, that William is caught and made accountable for his wrongdoings. It would further be great if Mike found true love.

well done

well done

good job

great job had me on pins and needles the whole time

WELL DONE

I do not think this is the end, please give us another chapter. I think father William was behind the killings and Mike should find another boy to love, and this time save him from his brother, just in the nick of time.

Next Kavanagh

Thanks to all who have said they like this one. There isn't/won't be a direct sequel to this particular case, but Mike Kavanagh next appears in my "coming very soon" April Fools' Day contest entry. He'll be doing an exchange stint in New Orleans and will get embroiled during the All Fools' Day festival there in two cases, a serial killing of blond rent-boys and a case inspired by Supreme Court Justice Scalia's death.

One of your best

This is one of your best stories - sometimes I find your flow, exposition, and sex a bit shallow and bland, but you've created an interesting character in Kavanaugh, the mystery was compelling, the sex was hot. I hope you'll reconsider continuing the story as a series.

happy

That it wasn't his brother!! I don't been dislike the brother. I wish he could be who he really is! (NOT a killer. A tolerable ass,like House!)

Good Erotic Thriller

As literature, I love this, the suspense is palpable and the twists and dilemma within the main character is great. The entire thing has an air of sadness around it that is very effective.

However, as erotica I just could not get turned on. Maybe it's just a personal thing for me, but I just found the entire ordeal tragic. Even though the pairing, thin vs muscular/younger vs older, is right up my alley my dick just wasn't as into it as my mind was haha. Like I said, probably just a personal thing about really only enjoying erotica with happy endings... or at least without death... but the story just made me really sad. Still a good story, just not one I would say I enjoyed.