Being myself a "mature" widower, although not wealthy enough to attract gold diggers, this story rubbed me the wrong way.
Anyhow thank you for sharing your stories with us.
D.S.
With regard to the other comment I at first became sensitive to the talk of the Cadillac, bank account and condo but prior to that was a long discussion of how the older men treated her more as a person than an object. Also have to remember that Patrick's wife was dead and the daughter abandoned them. Who else was he going to give everything to.
My comment is more about the end. Actually this is more of a preference than a complaint. After all the introduction to Walter and talk of the relationship when he passes we go through a new introduction to John. I would have liked an open ending instead. I can make the connection in my mind that the same thing is going to be repeated. But again that is just a preference.
What a treat, to revisit your style, o hott, tssssssizzling obsessive wonderbabe Susan Jill... (bowing my imaginary forehead into the puffy pillows) you're simply the 'bee's knees' ....
Your rememberance of me, I'm not so sure of that being among the elements within this story, but I'd not mind in the least, as it was not expected. Songslinger's Walter H. on my birth certificate and a couple emails we sent back and fourth years ago... always wishing for you the best... there's something about Susan Jill that resonates with me...
....." DOOoohh" ...if I may be so forwardly bold as to request an update??
Kind regards
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I liked many of your contributions but
Being myself a "mature" widower, although not wealthy enough to attract gold diggers, this story rubbed me the wrong way.
Anyhow thank you for sharing your stories with us.
D.S.
I can see how it might have been misunderstood
With regard to the other comment I at first became sensitive to the talk of the Cadillac, bank account and condo but prior to that was a long discussion of how the older men treated her more as a person than an object. Also have to remember that Patrick's wife was dead and the daughter abandoned them. Who else was he going to give everything to.
My comment is more about the end. Actually this is more of a preference than a complaint. After all the introduction to Walter and talk of the relationship when he passes we go through a new introduction to John. I would have liked an open ending instead. I can make the connection in my mind that the same thing is going to be repeated. But again that is just a preference.
Wow...wow!!
What a treat, to revisit your style, o hott, tssssssizzling obsessive wonderbabe Susan Jill... (bowing my imaginary forehead into the puffy pillows) you're simply the 'bee's knees' ....
Your rememberance of me, I'm not so sure of that being among the elements within this story, but I'd not mind in the least, as it was not expected. Songslinger's Walter H. on my birth certificate and a couple emails we sent back and fourth years ago... always wishing for you the best... there's something about Susan Jill that resonates with me...
....." DOOoohh" ...if I may be so forwardly bold as to request an update??
Kind regards
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